Masonbong

I like the story so far, it's absolutely hilarious reading this from both perspectives. It shows promise so far, and the grammar, and characters are great. I've love to see one more development in the magic or the history of the world but I'm sure that will come as the story progresses

I love all the talk of beer. Dwarves having shitty beer is one of the best prompts I've ever heard of and this story does it justice. The worldbuilding is going great and I'm looking forward to what the author comes up with next. I hope Pete becomes world famous for beer.

I despise stories with young children as the protagonists, especially where they are OP and everyone is afraid of them. There is no point to it, other than the author showing how "skilled" the protag is. This is a regular power fantasy, where there is no plot here, just him doing things for nebulous reasons without any consequences.