I can see why some people might not like this story, the MC is rambly and it could be called monotonous. But it hits all the right buttons for me, I enjoy the inner dialogue and each new incarnation feels fresh. The MC isn't a cardboard cut out either, not by any means. Also, the upload schedule is insane. Hope your not burning yourself out! Thanks for the story.
Utterly insane. A mish mash of cliche overplayed for humor and ridiculous implausibility that brings a smile to my face. It shouldn't work, but it does. And I love this story for it, it's probably not to the tastes of most people. But nothing is, and I found it enjoyable! So here's a 4 1/2 stars! 🎉
It had both 'plot', and plot. The characters- while most of them weren't exactly complex, felt real and genuine. I could ride along with the good and be ok with the bad... and then. It happened. Sorry if I sound sour here, but I really enjoyed this story. Emphasis on the past tense.
The author had the main character, a doppelgänger get multiple personality disorder. That... made me cringe. But ok, rapid system fueled evolutions. It's possible those are flawed I guess, and then the author pulls something even worse. They had some jackass god take away the identity that the main character worked to build over the course of several years, and the main character didn't even care. No hint of mental manipulation or any kind of influence, they just didn't care. Which makes absolutely no sense considering their greedy and selfish nature, what they lost was immeasurable. And then... AND THEN, the main character has some idiotic existential crisis bunch of filler chapters and oh oops, it was actually all a video game! Massive time skip and the MC leaves it, wooh hoo yay! Even if I don't mention the plot holes that leaves in its wake that's one of the worst and most unsatisfying endings I've ever seen. I honestly would have preferred a eternal hiatus having been declared before the whole multiple personalities fiasco, at least the story could have ended on a good note.
I loved this story, sadly it ended in Satan fueled dumpster fire.
It's... Not bad, but it's nothing special. Just another System story with a fresh coat of paint, if you haven't read many of them you could probably enjoy it. But to me- who's read quite a few of them, it's dull and monotonous. Maybe I'll give it another go sometime, when I'm craving some junk food or another system. This is an above average system, even if some of the dilougue makes me cringe (I'm assuming most of that is on purpose), and there's not anything special about it, it does system and blood thirsty protagonist better then most other novels.
Written upon reading: Ch 16
Doom. There's nothing more to say, but for the sake of filler. "DOOM DOOM DOOM, DOOM. DOOM DOOM, DOOM. DOOM, DOOM DOOM DOOM DOOM, DOOM DOOM? DOOM DOOM DOOM! DOOM! DOOM DOOM DOOM, DOOM DOOM! DOOM? DOOM, DOOM. DOOM, DOOM DOOM DOOM. DOOM DOOM DOOM! DOOM, DOOM DOOM DOOM DOOM. DOOM!"
One of the better books I've read on this site, the characters aren't one dimensional and there's a solid plot. Although there is one thing you could improve, the title. It's pretty tacky and nearly made me turn away from the novel entirely before I really knew what the novel was about, but I'm glad I sucked it up and read it.
Interesting character, you had me hooked and I'm sure it could have turned out to be something great. But sadly, the story seems to be dead.
As of Chapter 9, the dungeon building has just begun! And it seems there is much store for us, can't wait for the next chapter! It'll be a lot of fun.
4 1/2 Stars.
A generally entertaining Isekai story about a magical Biologist and a thicc sentient slime blowing stuff up? Even if I don't understand half of it, that's a recipe for success.
It's certainly not a bad book by any means, and it's to soon to judge at only chapter seven. But it's nothing special yet either, just another run of the mill 'Online' book.
All in all, I'll be sure to up my rating if it turns out to be something special.