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    1. Re: The Death of "Shone"

      Lieberman’s article Quantifying the evolutionary dynamics of language explains that modern irregular verbs are ancestors of Old English ‘strong’ verbs. ‘Weak’ verbs were conjugated by adding -ed. The (...)


    2. Re: A Boat

      What an interesting, supernatural concept. Is it alive?


    3. Re: Describe your story in the worst possible way!

      A healer has no idea what class he wants to pick so he gets involved in random sh*t and performs amazing feats of mental gymnastics to justify callous and reckless behavior, as well as watching misogynistic (...)


    4. Re: I got my first 0.5 rating and now I'm sad.

      So, how do you guys deal with a constant influx on 0.5 ratings? I just got 2 more today, out of about 5 for the whole week+ another 5 1s and 2s. Against 100 other 5 star ratings, just so we're clear, (...)


    5. Re: Honest Review/Feedback for Grim Dark Fantasy (Ongoing, 100+ pages, 30k words)

      Hello, I would appreciate if you had time to look at my fiction https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32135/the-overzealous-healer Mostly looking for a first impression, is it engaging?, pacing, etc. (...)


    6. Re: Desperately needs help for my story.... please?

      For spacing, too much is annoying to read on mobile. A paragraph is a paragraph, and the human eye can detect the change in gap easily enough. It's much wiser to use extra spaces as a literary/artistic (...)