Azaken

Azaken

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    1. Re: The Five Great Sins of Anime (can be applied to LNs, mangas, and other things as well)

      Add a sixth one: Spend 12 episodes on building the romance. And once you get the confession everything ends. A lot of potential storytelling is wasted. An actual relationship could go in many original (...)


    2. Re: The Five Great Sins of Anime (can be applied to LNs, mangas, and other things as well)

      Add a sixth one: Spend 12 episodes on building the romance. And once you get the confession everything ends. A lot of potential storytelling is wasted. An actual relationship could go in many original (...)


    3. Re: The Five Great Sins of Anime (can be applied to LNs, mangas, and other things as well)

      Finding any recent anime targeted to teen boys that has an equal gender ratio is nearly impossible. I'm not sure I've even seen one where there are less than 70% female characters. The only exceptions (...)


    4. Re: The Five Great Sins of Anime (can be applied to LNs, mangas, and other things as well)

      The Five Great Cardinal Sins of Anime: 1: Bad Character Gender Ratio (basically filling nearly every spot as they can with a female character): Harems basically do this a lot, though there are a few (...)


    5. Re: General Discussion Thread: Introductions, greetings, and randomness

      Question!  (of a silly nature) Are you sure one single thread can contain all the general chaos, randomness, and insanity of this entire site?


    6. Re: THE ARENA: ULTIMATE BATTLE ROYAL!

      Alright, to help show some more here, and to get the fights going, here is another matchup! Yuu (from Reincarnated Boy's Tears) vs Ryuu (From Aurion: The New World) Ryuu has his current loadout from (...)


    7. Re: I’ll review your story, swap not required.

      I have three stories I would like some more reviews or even comments for, since I am still new here and probably have a lot to improve on, as well as also liking to know when people liked my stories and (...)


    8. Re: Review Swap? (Fantasy/Other World/Isekai)

      If you’re still hunting for more candidates I’d be game for a review swap. A review of Aurion in exchange for one on Crimson Crow: Thief of Fortune  Caveat. I’m a little out of the strike zone (...)


    9. Re: Ya Know What? Go Ahead And Plug. Show Ya Stories

      This is a new idea that I posted, its about a girl who reincarnates as a Prince and gets a bunch of OP cheats, but is the Prince of a Kingdom that is surrounded by enemies and is often attacked by ridiculously (...)


    10. Re: THE ARENA: ULTIMATE BATTLE ROYAL!

      Well, that was still pretty good.  Arsmosis is a tough nut to crack due to the fact he is one of the strongers people in Aurion. Oh yeah, speaking of Chapter 3, I forgot to add an enemy: Demon Hellrabbit (...)


    11. Re: THE ARENA: ULTIMATE BATTLE ROYAL!

      HELLLLLOOOOOO LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, TO THE OPENING OF THE FIRST EVER (probably) ARENA!   HERE, OCs FROM DIFFERENT STORIES WILL BATTLE TO SEE WHO IS THE GREATER OC! Anyways, with that dramatic message, (...)


    12. Re: A good harem story. Does it exist? Is it possible to make?

      Harems as they classically exist cannot and will never be good.  If you wish to write a "harem" that actually adds something to the story and plot here are some quick tips from a harem hater: - (...)


    13. Re: A good harem story. Does it exist? Is it possible to make?

      Maybe make a Bokke-Tsukkomi relationship. The harem are all bokke while the MC is a tsukkomi That's usually the case with all those "psuedo-harem" shows out there where it's not romantic, or there (...)


    14. Re: I got my first 0.5 rating and now I'm sad.

      Id be more okay with it if they actually gave reasons why they disliked it, or things I could improve on.   Or left any comments at all.  But they dont.  Hence why I think Troll. Because instant and (...)


    15. Re: I got my first 0.5 rating and now I'm sad.

      Now my other story, Reincarnated Boy's Tears, was also hit with a mysterious .5 rating!  >:O These trolls need to be stopped!  Or at least counteracted!   https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29749/the-reincarnated-boys-tears (...)


    16. Re: Review Swap? (Fantasy/Other World/Isekai)

      Nice! I’d be up for a review swap for my story, Twin Fates. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28785/twin-fates Here’s an exclusive spoiler; Here, there be dragons 🙌🏼 Id love to check it (...)


    17. Re: Would Love to Review Swap with anyone! Looking for some good reads

      Ditto!  I will also be trying to get to everyone later tonight, when I am more available!


    18. Re: Would Love to Review Swap with anyone! Looking for some good reads

      I’d be happy to do a swap, I am not great with grammar, but I love to look at characters and style.  You can find my story here,  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29062/panthea-online Im always (...)


    19. Re: Have you ever thought about what an anime opening would be for your story, and was tempted to write it out?

      Yeah....for me, maybe its just because a lot of anime openings are done so well, but it makes me want some for my own stories.   Especially the energetic upbeat action filled ones.


    20. Re: Review Swap? (Fantasy/Other World/Isekai)

      Im just starting out and therefore would love some feedback!  I have been writing for quite some time but iv been trying to take it to the next level.   I also would love to read some good isekai fantasies, (...)