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Cultivating Dungeon

iteresting concept can't say much with only 2 chapters


Awaken Online

the reason i say its not for me is due to personal preference so it doesn"t mean the story is no good.

the story itself is rather good and the gramar is great as well 


The Slime Dungeon Chronicles (prequel)

In the first book after the death of princess diana retained her memories but after the first book she Does not

and the way the mc wakes up changes as well

 


monster evolution world

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              


How to protect a hero

all of the chapters you wrote are so short that put together the form a prologue


Kingdom Hearts

 now you said it's based on mondaiji tatchi but have u ever read the light novel higschool dxd or seen the anime, cuz u used some stuff from that as well such as the rating games