Volos

Volos

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    1. RE: Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      Sure, but it will probably be next week before I get around to it.


    2. RE: Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      OK, I finished your work. I’m gonna try to have a complete review up today. Details will be placed in this thread. Heya. I'd love some critique of my story and a review. And of course I'll leave (...)


    3. RE: I'll trade reviews with you!

      Chapter 27, but you can’t miss the warnings. There’s another somewhat objectionable section in an earlier chapter, abuse rather than something clearly sexual, but again there are clear warnings in the (...)


    4. RE: I'll trade reviews with you!

      When you first asked I thought you didn’t quite have enough for a full review. I’ve been following it now I think you do, so I’ll try to get one done today or tomorrow. Ironically I didn’t have anything (...)


    5. RE: I need help with my title and summary!

      I second the opinions above, and care to add a simpler title suggestion (remember “Magician” was a best seller): Guilded Adventures Of course that requires coining a word that looks like it might (...)


    6. RE: Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      I noticed the huge similarity between your work and Mushouku Tensei Thanks for the recommendation, I hadn't heard of it. I'll look it up and give it a read. Literally every reincarnation story (...)


    7. RE: Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      First, I want to apologize for some harsh wording, if I ever have some free time I’ll plan to go back and soften them some. I don’t however, apologize for the content of the message. You could really (...)


    8. RE: Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      I'll do a swap too. Since I'm new in here, I'm willing to learn lots. Here's my link if you want to help me with my review. https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15807/heroic-chronicles-book-1-a-hero-arises (...)


    9. RE: Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      Well, I’m done fishing through your whale of a beast tale. Review is up on the page; if you want me to take it down, just ask and I will. At first you made some grammar mistakes that I thought might (...)


    10. RE: Review my story? (Willing to trade reviews! )

      I've read up to what you have posted so far in He's the One. I'm going to put my review here, because I don't think I can put any higher than 2/5 if I actually went out and made a public one. By far, (...)


    11. RE: Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      Aoisatan, I'm going to aim to be done by Friday.


    12. RE: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      Thanks for the feedback. I'm a bit slammed at the moment, but want to come back and merge your ideas later. Happy New Year, Volos


    13. Review Swap 2: Revenge of the Gold Stars

      So I finally took the time to get my version control under wraps and put all the corrected versions up on RRL (probably still some mistakes, but these should be much better). Using too many sites to host (...)


    14. RE: Review my story? (Willing to trade reviews! )

      I’m game for a swap. First question though, did you mean to use the enlarged font throughout? I prefer for a "public facing" review on the fiction page, with any particularly technical critiques here. (...)


    15. RE: Review on my story (swaps are available)

      @Mopps NP, just let me know if you have any questions for my review.


    16. RE: Review on my story (swaps are available)

      Right well I finished.... Asking someone to only comment on a story, and not how it's written is a bit like asking someone, "I know that the chicken breast is as tough as shoe leather, but how does it (...)


    17. RE: Review on my story (swaps are available)

      I’m game for a swap. To be clear you are not interested in thoughts on grammar for the first few chapters, but how about style? I prefer for a "public facing" review on the fiction page, with any particularly (...)


    18. RE: Review swaps

      Sorry for the huge number of typos in that, I was using voice to text quickly. I just went back and fixed them. Yeah, I pointed out a grammar mistake in the first few chapters, but I didn’t keep doing (...)


    19. RE: Review swaps

      I’m a huge fan of Tolkien’s work, and only by RRL standards would I be considered a minimalist. I certainly don’t fit that category by any objective reading of print literature. I’m afraid that my style (...)


    20. RE: Review swaps

      If you don't mind, I always appreciate people to include the chapter they stopped at in their reviews if it wasn't to the end (from the content of the review, I wasn't sure if you actually reached the (...)