OHornswallow

OHornswallow

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    1. Re: Do I have to pander with my cover?

      I have no idea what my audience is.


    2. Re: Do I have to pander with my cover?

      I'm not getting many views on my fiction and I feel like part of the problem is my cover. Right now I've gone with a minimalistic cover, but I can't help but feel it could be better. "To make a cover (...)


    3. Re: Upcoming character in my novel. His name is Flats!

      Aaaaaand I accidentally deleted my upload of it.


    4. Re: Upcoming character in my novel. His name is Flats!

      https://i.redd.it/m2e94lyctvo31.png Here is Flats, or at least part of Flats.


    5. Re: Signs a story is going to be bad.

      If the story is full of moe antics right off the bat, there's often no depth to it other than "look how cute these girls are, now watch the boobies bounce." It makes me feel like the author hopes I won't (...)


    6. Re: Any Isekais with female protags that aren't lesbians?

      My Isekai character is a straight woman. She has to be or a lot of the story would collapse. Fair warning: The story is 18+, so if you're a minor, please don't read it. Also... unfortunately, I haven't (...)


    7. Re: Looking for stories with a Aquatic (fish,shark,etc) Main Character

      Important question: when you say "aquatic" are you looking for a story that actually takes place underwater? Or will anything sea life based do?


    8. Re: Is there a better way to ask for critique?

      All right, It looks like the general consensus is that my story is too short so far. Thanks everyone!


    9. Re: too much romance on a litrpg?

      Romance is popular because people like it. Write it well and I see no reason why an Isekai couldn’t have it.


    10. Re: Is there a better way to ask for critique?

      I think the site itself has a Mature Content tag that disallows underaged people from reading NSFW works, right?  Doesn’t look like it, all I see is a content flag for “sexual content.” Unless that (...)


    11. Re: Is there a better way to ask for critique?

      Also, your content warning of "Only 18+ Readers Please" knocks out like 75% of the userbase lol, that might be part of it Hey, legally I gotta put it in there. I have other stories meant for minors, (...)


    12. Re: Is there a better way to ask for critique?

      10-chapter or 20-chapter mark Eep, I only have about seven chapters written. Guess I'd better keep pushing myself, then!


    13. Re: Is there a better way to ask for critique?

      I requested constructive critique/reviews on my fiction in the description, but haven't gotten any yet. I've already posted four chapters and haven't seen much traction. Is there something I can do to (...)


    14. Re: Is it okay to start your novel with something "adult" to establish who you want your readerbase to be?

      If it is an extreme shock effect, then it's your decision to keep it or not - but if it's a shock effect you're loosing part of it if you use it in your opening scene. Not a shock effect, more of a (...)


    15. Re: Story idea: a human with the [Skeleton] class!

      If we’re going the “computer simulation” route, maybe a bug in a recent patch classifies all humans as skeletons (if skeleton = y then race = skeleton), and people are waiting around, hoping for a fix... (...)


    16. Re: Your main character's theme song

      What a fun thread! Liz:  Aqua - Aquarius. While this song is purportedly about a drug addiction, which she doesn’t have, the lyrics fit her mixed emotions about her transformation and MC Tentachill. (...)


    17. Re: Is it okay to start your novel with something "adult" to establish who you want your readerbase to be?

      Opening the story in an adult store makes it seem like the story will have a sexual focus. That's.... that's my whole issue. The story definitely does have a sexual focus, at times, but there's more (...)


    18. Re: Octo Smoosh

      This is a character in my story, I just haven't gotten to them yet. https://66.media.tumblr.com/322cbb3809d0ee57adc0a9b75bf5a01a/tumblr_pwkqqtL7EO1stsr67o1_640.jpg Comfy cozy in their little den-bed.


    19. Re: How to flag spam PMs?

      Just got an obviously fishy PM with instructions to send them an e-mail so I could see “pictures.” I know my story has sexy stuff in it, but come on...  Couldn’t find a flag button for the message on (...)


    20. Re: Critique my book cover!

      The character drawings are absolutely stunning! I'm going to disagree with the top post about the "missing" mouths because it's fairly clear to me that it's a manga-inspired style choice. However, the (...)