Danetello

Danetello

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    1. Re: Transformations.

      Try my story, Colossus' Dream. The whole premise of the book is about growing and transforming into something greater. Fair warning, the MC doesn't change in terms of species but in terms of size and abilities. (...)


    2. Re: Is once a month too long for updates?

      I've been part of almost every debate regarding upload schedules and it all usually boils down to 'the more, the better'. That's always the answer. I'm not here to provide advice, but to present the other (...)


    3. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      I've finished all of my old requests and I'm thus open to any new request. Just post in this thread if you need any help.


    4. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'The Jellybeans': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29499/the-jellybeans Concerning your remark about the description seeming unappealing, I can see the mistakes that you are making. Firstly, (...)


    5. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'Okane o Subete Sekai e Chikara - Money is Power in any World': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29581/okane-o-subete-sekai-e-chikara I went and reformatted the original description while (...)


    6. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'Andrea's Tale': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29694/andreas-tale The wasn't that much that could be improved upon, all that I did was edit the format a bit and add one comma. My honest (...)


    7. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      See if you can do anything with this. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29176/the-space-legacy Is it too long? Thanks. Honestly, it looks good. Usually, I'm an advocate for shorter description (...)


    8. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'Panthea Online': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29062/panthea-online I mostly tried to improve and polish your description. I tried to keep the meaning the same in the editing process. (...)


    9. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      Would you do mine? I'm new, and would like some feedback https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/29714/the-world-crossing-isekai-hunter This story has not had a new chapter in the past 2 weeks and thus (...)


    10. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      Thank you for this service. Hopefully you can help me come out with a better blurb. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28977/exceed-system Thank you for considering my request! It seems that (...)


    11. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      My synopsis is basically non-existent, but that's on purpose as i don't want to be superfluous and since my story has no real plot. Hoping you would be able to make it more impactful despite the small (...)


    12. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      Alright, sure. I don't cater to telling the POV, and it's not fantasy, which isn't quite a fit for this site. So give it a shot, if you like: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/26394/integration This (...)


    13. Re: Non-Humanoid MC

      What are your limits of classifying something 'non-humanoid'? I know what you mean with MC's always getting a human form. For example, the MC is a dragon and they suddenly get the ability to transform (...)


    14. Re: How are achievements awarded?

      The website most likely, (I could be wrong), checks the statistics of all of its users on a regularly set basis and hands out achievement accordingly, to save on resources. If you are wondering what (...)


    15. Re: The search for the highest level account.

      Lone is at it again, now at 3rd highest reputation!


    16. Re: ModernMilitary/fantasy/Transported to a fantasy world

      I have some bad news for you. As far as I know, and I hope I'm wrong, there doesn't really exist a novel like that. "Out of Space", that's on Webnovel, has a Sci-fi vs fantasy theme and it is done okay (...)


    17. Re: The search for the highest level account.

      Updated, well you are second now.


    18. Re: The search for the highest level account.

      Updated the new highest levels because of the Badge rework. Congratulations, Lone, for climbing from third to first place.


    19. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      Hey, I'd be beyond grateful if you helped with my descreption. While the current one gives an okay introduction, I would imagine you could easily come up with a better one, given how you do this regularly. (...)


    20. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'The Dragon Princess Will Stay Alive!': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/27959/the-dragon-princess-will-stay-alive The edit I did was from your current description and not the one you posted. (...)