Danetello

Danetello

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    1. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story ‘Monarchy of the Ancients’: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/34184/monarchy-of-the-ancients I tried to trim down the original text, as well as compact some of the sentences into a more (...)


    2. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'The world traveler from the future': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33875/the-world-t I mostly cleaned up the tenses and improved the flow of the sentences. I hope you like it. You can (...)


    3. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'Immense Space': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33184/immense-space I mostly tried to reword the sentences and improve the structure. I'm not completely satisfied with the final sentence (...)


    4. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'The Beast and The Swallow': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33058/the-beast-and-the-swallow I agree that your description seems a bit wordy, but there's nothing that I can take away from (...)


    5. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'Trials of Sanity (Abyss Evolution Series)': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33511/trials-of-sanity-abyss-evolution-series I only added some commas and a few corrections. I tend to use (...)


    6. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      Anything you can do to help clean mine up a bit would be awesome. No rush though. Thanks!  Honestly, the description looks good. Apart from the one comma splice, I couldn't find any other mistakes. (...)


    7. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story ‘A Stranger in Sorcererstown’: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/31014/a-stranger-in-sorcererstown You used two different spellings of the town, so I chose one of them. I don’t know what (...)


    8. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      When you have free time, can you also take a look at my story's description? I am always open to feedback and suggestions. The Lord of the Stars You haven't posted a new chapter in over 2 weeks. (...)


    9. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      Hey! I could use another opinion on my story description/summary. I think I'm rather bad at them... As in, I give away the wrong things and make other parts too vague, but have no other way of making (...)


    10. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      I am looking for something like this if you could help would be appreciated thanks. Here’s the story link https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/7872/new-world-god You haven't posted a new chapter (...)


    11. Re: Reader swaps to gain followers?

      Back in the day, 2014 to 2016-ish, some of the biggest fictions on the site did try to 'shout out' other fictions on the site that they enjoy or if someone asked them. On a surface level, this seems fine, (...)


    12. Re: Ridiculously OP MC

      You guys do realise this thread is 3 years old?


    13. Re: The search for the highest level account.

      Since Kanadaj reworked the member list, it's unfortunately made tracking the highest level accounts much easier... I don't exactly know how the 'rankings' are determined, but it has allowed me te reupdate (...)


    14. Re: How many authors here have a published work?

      Look at this thread: https://www.royalroad.com/forums/thread/62880


    15. Re: Pretentious, Trite, or Just Write?

      There have been CYOA stories on this website before and some have been decently successful, but I would just like to give you a friendly warning before you consider writing one here. It's entirely possible (...)


    16. Re: LitRPG authors, how long did it take you to plan your story before you started writing?

      This may not be completely related to the question, but I just want to mention it. If you're writing a LitRPG then you aren't contractually obligated to have overly in-depth stats and complex formulas; (...)


    17. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      I have finished all of the old requests and I'm thus open to any new requests.


    18. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'A Super Robot story': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/23547/a-super-robot-story I tried to break up the sentences and reword some part, but how successful I was in this endeavour is up (...)


    19. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      I guess I don't mind taking a try. A new describtion (or an extra blurb) would be nice. You can take your time if anything, I'm not really in any immediate desperation but I would be very grateful. (...)


    20. Re: I'm willing to edit anyone's story description.

      For the story 'Ragna': https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/31235/ragna First of all, don't begin a sentence with a conjunction; that include the words, 'but, and, or, because' etc. I tried to improve the (...)