Donovano Weatherino

Donovano Weatherino

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Poor Cultivation

Have been really enjoying the mystery surrounding the MC's situation, information is delivered to the reader at a nice, slow burn. Characters have their own quirks without being over the top, and so far everything seems internally consistent.

The only gripes I have are that the appearances could be more descriptive and that the MC takes everything far too much in stride, but even the latter can be explained by both his temperament and the system's alterations.

Overall, a pretty damn solid story (amazing by Royal Road's standards, let’s be real), and if it continues at this quality it has a bright future ahead of it.