It's not perfect but it is highly enjoyable in a wish fulfilment kind of way.
The style is not as unique as some of the best here on Rr but it is improving as the story goes.
The story is a fanfiction done in a highly enjoyable way.
Grammar is fine, the minor mistakes and misspellings are forgivable.
Characters are also improving as the story progresses.
I'm not a great reviewer I know but I want this story to be noticed more and encourage the author to continue honing his craft 😊😊😊
Style is good. The characterization of each individual is just a sliver below professional.
Story is good with great phasing.
Mc actually acts in a believable manner. (rare on rr)
Barely any grammatical mistakes.
Ps. I don't really know how to make a review.. I just like what I like and this story is really entertaining for me 😊
A fresh, fun, cliché filled story (literally) that makes you revisit RR again and again
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(Needs two hundred words ugh)
Very fun read! Fuck you author!! Your awesome! Thanks for this entertaining read!
- It is not an original read but it will give you something to get occupied with your time.
- The start is as much as you can expect to these kind of stories, and if you read as much as i do (i read quite a lot) then it might not be for you.
- Tho i must be clear that the story is NOT bad in anyway (I REPEAT, THIS STORY IS WELL WRITTEN WITH FEW PLOTHOLES) other than that it has the same plot as any chinese cultivation novel's deprived or bullied Mc to someone who can dish out justice with their own hands.
- READ IT for yourself to know if this will be your next to follow story or next favorite. But in my case, it is not. Kudos to the author for getting on the trending!! Your the man! (Or woman.. i didn't check...)
A weaver told me to see this i loved it! Its a weaver like story that has a weaver like story!!
It's at the top 5 trending so i gave it a try, but its not my cup of tea.
If you want something that will make you go 'ooooohhhh!!' Or 'ahhhhhhh!!!' This is not it. But you should still give it a try just so you know for sure.