Noizce

Noizce

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Death With Benefits

The storyline is good, ít doesn’t have that much grammar error that would affect the story it also have that fantasy with comedy and stuff so basically it’s good.


The Strongest Skill: Getting rich while becoming stronger
 

I don't think it's that bad, i mean the grammar Is bad and the story Is a little cringy but the author is improving the story(and improvimg his grammar errors?) All the other reviews are mostly bad but overall i thin it's readable.