TheImperial

TheImperial

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    1. Re: Critique Request: The First Draft of the first Chapter in my New Original Story

      try not to introduce your character through mirrors, its something of a cliche in the first person, and does nothing to improve the narrative. That....is actually something I don't mind. If anything, (...)


    2. Re: Critique Request: The First Draft of the first Chapter in my New Original Story

        I slowly opened my crusted over eyes, as the after-effects of the ritual began to ripple through my body. 1rst person is usually best to make the reader jump into the head of the character. While (...)


    3. Re: Critique Request: The First Draft of the first Chapter in my New Original Story

      Title is pretty self explanatory. I'm going to write an actual Original Story that I plan to update with actual Chapters as time goes on. Of course, I don't want to treat this like a Fanfiction and just (...)


    4. Re: Critique My Next Chapter (The Exalted Guard)

      I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll only focus on this chapter's overall impression when I critique. but there is something I'd like to mention, which involves your previous chapters. what (...)


    5. Re: Critique My Next Chapter (The Exalted Guard)

      So impressions of the chapter were that is was pretty good. At the start we get a little intoduction to Mike’s frustration at life, the world in general, and that type of stuff. Which is a good strat for (...)


    6. Re: Critique My Next Chapter (The Exalted Guard)

      I have the next chapter for the Exalted Guard ready, but I would like some Critique over it before I post it up. If anyone would like to give me tips on how to improve, go right ahead. Mike stopped (...)


    7. Re: Check My Premise Line (Objective Feedback Please)

      Wow. Thank you all for your responses. For some reason I wasn't getting notifications for this thread, and that's why I didn't try and reply. Here's what I've gotten so far from the feedback, and (...)


    8. Re: Check My Premise Line (Objective Feedback Please)

      I back when I thought about turning writing into a full time job, I always thought about trying to get my short stories published so that I could make money off them. Now that I'm sure that writing is (...)


    9. Re: RoyalRoad#101 - Free Reviews each Sunday.

      Get to me whenever you can :). https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/24780/the-exalted-guard


    10. Re: Looking for some Reviews

      So, I'm a new user here, and I just got a fanfiction I wrote completely moved over from another site. The last chapter was finally posted today, so I'd like some reviews and criticisms for the work. (...)


    11. Re: New Here, Could Use Some Story Help

      Hi there! I'm also new here, so I figure I'd help you out. If it's help with Story Structure, then I can give you a tip that I learned off SkillShare that helped me. It's a basic idea on how to write (...)


    12. Re: Ya Know What? Go Ahead And Plug. Show Ya Stories

      Might as well plug/shill/promote myself while I'm here. Best thing to do being a new User here. I have three, two original, and one fanfiction: Title: The Family (Original) Genre: Contemporary, (...)


    13. Re: Writer's Origin Stories

      Well this would be as good a way as any to introduce myself. Hello everyone. I'm TheImperial. I'm new to this site, and my start to writing isn't really that noble. Back when I was like 12 or something, (...)