EleMentalPhoenix

EleMentalPhoenix

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First: I absolutely love this story despite my 'honest' ratings. 

Second: This is no story for one that doesnt like Harem, Grinding or self-inserts, because it has (at least hints) of them.

Third: Lets commence the rating.

Style:  Enjoyable Read, very funny at times and not boring to read. Bit short chapters thought.

Story: Interesting idea for the driving plot, but doesnt focus on it or some more in depth stuff that one would like for a original story.

But it doesnt need that, in my opinion. Its Its light-hearted, funny, got enough plot to not be total slice-of-life but the explanations are short enough to not be remembered by the next paragraph ^^ 

Grammar: Not native speaking, and didnt see any big errors. So, perfect score from me here.

Characters: As already 'warned' in the beginning, the MC has hints of self-insert but else, is a functioning human being  more than some in other stories ^^ 

Side characters are a bit glossed over or not existent, but those that are mentioned are also Human(oid) enough. 

 

Also, prepare for a lot of farming ^^ 

 

To my fellow readers: Give it a try for some casual read, i enjoyed it enormously.

To the author: Keep up the good work, i expect more chapters and more farming ;) pls


I WAS A LONER, BUT MY CLASS GOT SUMMONED TO ANOTHER WORLD AND NOW…

I really like the premise of this story. Stand at the point of writing this, the chapter count is 18. 

Now to get in detail and starting with

Story: Summoned Classroom  MC is the outsider. Standart stuff, but the story so far didnt disappoint in general quality and there are many promising leads and hints so far. 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 Character: Everyone reacts as one would expect them to, or how a newly summoned hero observes them. A handful of interesting persons got introduced, the most others are the bland mix of background character, i like the mix ^^

Grammar: I didnt see any obvious errors, but am no native speaker, so. Its good to read
 
Style: Can hold your attention and let you grave for more chapters, as good and promising stories should. 
 
To my fellow readers: Give it a try, its worth your read
 
To the author: Keep up the good work, I'll keep reading ^^

Project: You have died

I really like the story.  

Good characters, interesting plot.

I enjoyed my binge ^^


Planetary Brawl

At least thats what I have here with 3 Chapters out  ^^

I live the setting and the story seems to be good enough to stand on its own. 

I'll recommend reading and I will continue to support. ^^

So: Keep up the work, Author. :D


Eight-Bit Bastards

In a RR where Dungeons and VR are dominating, this one is a fresh take on a story.

I know there are only 3 chapters out, but they show the greatest potential i saw in a long time. 

Story: I love 8-Bit and this Story could be a biography of myself ;)

Grammar and Style: So far, excellent.

Character: As dumb as it sounds, these characters arent 2-D ^^

So, to my fellow readers: Try it.

To the author: Keep up the good work ^^


RE: Trailer Trash

Normally i dont like real life storys.

Normally i dont even read them. 

But this one is special.

A good twist, a plotline you can see from miles but dont even know what your next step will be and lovely characters.

I really hope there will be more. laughing


DCO- Dungeon Core Online

Heya. 

Style: Its good but nothing exceptional.

Story: Its a fairly common theme. With fairly common Concept. But its funny and entertaining enough.

Grammar: Im not a native speaker and didnt see any errors so yeah..

Character: Well how to say this.. The MC is a standard Nerd and the other characters are like a clone of real people.. but hey, it works.

I would recommend it

Keep up the good work laughing

 


Construct Your Fate

If you like LitRPG here you go

[It is a good story,

The characters sometimes seem a bit unnatural (it may be because some arent human) but the bromance is just hilarious. 

The skills, stats and perks are really good, and im curious what will come in the future

I hope there will be more chapters and the bigger plot will show up.]

Edit on Chap 19:

The situation cleared, the plot thickens and the story evolves into a really good one. 

Still my earlyer statement stands: If you like litRPG, you gonna like this. 


A dungeon core story: Magic with a hint of Science

If you like dungeonbuilding with a hint of story, here you go.

It doesnt have much in terms of plot right now (the introduction of the heroine doesnt count) but it has a stable foundation with the worldbuilding.

 

I really like dungeons so i really like ''even" such a 'simple' story.

Every story isn't simple for the author, so keep up the work laughing


System Programmer

Its a nice story with some new, some old and some strange elements in it.

 

It has Plot Characterdevelopement and funny scenes so give it a try.

Spoiler: minor spoiler