RE: Let me review your story, no need to review swap

#63
I don't really know why but I am writing a story that doesn't get the usual traction like my other stories did and I want to know why because I feel like I am doing a pretty good job so far even if it is only 4 chapters in. I would really appreciate it if you pointed all the bad shit I have to fix if it's that bad no one even wants to follow it after 4 chapters...

http://royalroadl.com/fiction/16971/domus

RE: Let me review your story, no need to review swap

#68
Please, if you have the time, could you review my story Tome of Stealth? It is a LitRPG with two leading characters, one an arcane assassin and the other a bard healer/buffer. I’m not sure if you’re even able to keep up with all of the requests so I’ll understand if you aren’t able to.

Thank you for your time!

Link: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/17405/tome-of-stealth