Let me review your story, no need to review swap

#1
Hi there,

I just want to do review for all of you. I have no specific genres so shoot me up with your title. 

My review style:
- long and detailed review. If you like a short one i.e. "You story greataz, banterz yowzaah!", then sorry I'm not your guy. I want to spent some time and really help the authors.
- public facing. I will not give you lower than 3.5 stars in your review. If your story falls below 3.5 stars, I'll write the review here instead. If it's more than 4 stars, I'll post in your page.
- I'll not attack your grammar unless it is too bad until my eyes bleed and I needs 16 dictionaries to actually help me understand what you are trying to write. Comprehension + flow >>>> perfect grammar.
- I'll be gentle and helpful as much as I can.

What I won't do.
- Boost you up for no particular reason other than to appear good.
- Promote your works (not yet as I don't have lots of fanbase myself currently.)

Give me some time to read and review your story. Don't be surprised if I took longer than I needed. A good review take's time, right?

By the way, I don't need you to do a swap for me. If you are insistent, check the link to my story below and have a look first before you decided to review.

RE: Let me review your story, no need to review swap

#2
Well, since the oppurtunity arose, have a look at my novel. I actually don't particulary care about the review in terms of its 5 main categories, as I plan on editing after the first novel (so atm grammar and style isn't a priority for me). I just want people's feedback on the story and character aspect so far. Anything else is extra.

Hope you enjoy. Don't force yourself to read it if you don't like it and criticism (harsh or not) is always appreciated, thanks.

Also, take your time. I don't mind if you do it today or next year. As long as I know someone's reading it, and (hopefully) enjoying it, I'm satisfied.

(My novel is Magikind and should be in my signature)

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#4
1/28/2018 2:28:18 PMgeorgebakerson123 Wrote: [ -> ]Well, since the oppurtunity arose, have a look at my novel. I actually don't particulary care about the review in terms of its 5 main categories, as I plan on editing after the first novel (so atm grammar and style isn't a priority for me). I just want people's feedback on the story and character aspect so far. Anything else is extra.

Hope you enjoy. Don't force yourself to read it if you don't like it and criticism (harsh or not) is always appreciated, thanks.

Also, take your time. I don't mind if you do it today or next year. As long as I know someone's reading it, and (hopefully) enjoying it, I'm satisfied.

(My novel is Magikind and should be in my signature)


Sure, I'll do a review for you :)


1/28/2018 4:41:05 PM86lenoloc Wrote: [ -> ]Hello there! I would like to have a review on my novel down in my signature. It's pretty long, like over 50 chapters so I know that it will take quite some time, but you don't have to read all of it if it doesn't interest you.  Thanks so much and have a good day! Very Happy


Sure.. I'll get on to it as soon as I'm done reviewing others :)

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#9
1/29/2018 6:49:30 AMAoisatan Wrote: [ -> ]Hey there! My fic is in my sig. I'd love to receive honest reviews as this fic is to help me train for my 2nd story.


Sure, give me some time to review. Being swamped lately but I will finish in a few days


1/30/2018 1:42:56 AMMopps Wrote: [ -> ]Hey, if you have the time and your not completely swamped it'll be cool if you could give me a review! No rush, but yeah it wouild mean a bunch to me if you could review it! Here is the link and thanks!

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15705/the-greensdale-project


Sure, I would love too. Let me finish up the others and I get to yours soon, alright.

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#12
Hello!

Offering to review without a swap is a VERY generous offer; I can only imagine how many books you have lined up so far.

My story is a Light Novel, so it's fast-paced, minimally descriptive, and has A LOT of dialogue.

It has Manga-esque vibes to it with some tropes but it should be noted that there IS some descriptive sexual content; I marked every warning tag.

It's a modern-fantasy, so the genre might jive with you, or not.

If you're not interested in this kind of story, feel free to disregard this reply. Afterall, your doing this with just your free time so you might as well enjoy it ^~^

http://royalroadl.com/fiction/15896/echoes-of-the-mirror

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#17
2/3/2018 12:45:09 AM Wrote: [ -> ]Hello!

Offering to review without a swap is a VERY generous offer; I can only imagine how many books you have lined up so far.

My story is a Light Novel, so it's fast-paced, minimally descriptive, and has A LOT of dialogue.

It has Manga-esque vibes to it with some tropes but it should be noted that there IS some descriptive sexual content; I marked every warning tag.

It's a modern-fantasy, so the genre might jive with you, or not.

If you're not interested in this kind of story, feel free to disregard this reply. Afterall, your doing this with just your free time so you might as well enjoy it ^~^

http://royalroadl.com/fiction/15896/echoes-of-the-mirror


Done with yours. Hope my review helps you in your writing.


2/4/2018 8:53:28 PMChipMunster Wrote: [ -> ]Hey, that's generous! Others have said that but I wanted to repeat it anyway. Wink

My fiction is down below in my sig. Give it a read if you're so inclined!

Thanks in advance!


Dude/dudette. 

I wanted to give you a proper review but it seems that I could not do myself justice and perhaps you too. So, I'll abstain myself from rating/reviewing yours. I had gave the reasons in your comment section.

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#18
2/9/2018 9:01:49 PM Wrote: [ -> ]It's really cool of you to do that. Well, if you have the time, I'd love it if you took a look at my story. It's a bit early in development, but i guess since you're probably swamped right now, by the time you get around to it there might be a few more chapters out. Hope you enjoy it.

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/16319/tyrants-and-heroes-the-hollow-triumvirate


Done a basic review. Will get more into it once I'm free and further down the chapters.

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#19
3/4/2018 6:19:38 AMacederequiza Wrote: [ -> ]Dude/dudette. 

I wanted to give you a proper review but it seems that I could not do myself justice and perhaps you too. So, I'll abstain myself from rating/reviewing yours. I had gave the reasons in your comment section.

Fair enough! Thanks for the time dedicated to reading my story. I'll be rewriting it pretty heavily once I'm more advanced with the storyline so I'm definitely taking your feedback into account.

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#20
I'd love for you to check mine out if you're still doing reviews.

Half A God: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/16634/half-a-god

For centuries, the Behdin Inquisitors have hunted Mindrippers with a single-mindedness that bordered on obsession. In an age of musket and cannon, the hunt leads them to the ancient city of Digne where women are being butchered by an unknown killer. Here, Enk Gueye, a young scion of a noble house, wakes from a nightmare to discover he can read—and control—other people’s minds. He thinks he’s a god, but the Behdin Inquisitors have another name for what he has become: Mindripper.
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