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#21
Well I would be foolish not to slip my story link in here. (It's in my signature) The first two chapters are about 10,000 words.
Do you like fun? Then check out my GameLit story, PARTY HARD. https://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/19142/party-hard
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If you're still doing it, would be glad if you could review my ongoing novel: Classmancers - A MOBA Esport Story.
It's a very experimental story for me, since I haven't seen any examples of this genre. It's severely lacking in feedback and I really need it to figure out what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
It's a very experimental story for me, since I haven't seen any examples of this genre. It's severely lacking in feedback and I really need it to figure out what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.
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Also. If anyone here wants to review swap with me, let me know.
Hey, you. Yeah you, I see you reading this. You like free wifi? Well I got it right over here. Just click this link.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/17422/new-legends
You may also find a decent fantasy book over there. Who really knows.
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/17422/new-legends
You may also find a decent fantasy book over there. Who really knows.
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Hi, I don't know if you have time, but if you still willing to review something, I'd be glad to.
Here's the link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/18009/adventure-to-the-stars
Here's the link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/18009/adventure-to-the-stars
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If you are still doing reviews, feel free to check out mine when you got some free time!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/18934/sora-a-tale-of-a-hero
Thanks in advance!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/18934/sora-a-tale-of-a-hero
Thanks in advance!
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#31
I would love to have you check out my book and hear your thoughts =)
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/17370/origin-of-chaos-rise-of-anarchy-book-1
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/17370/origin-of-chaos-rise-of-anarchy-book-1
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#32
My book only has 3 chapter so far. I'd love to have you be my first review.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/19850/bloodlines
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/19850/bloodlines
Necromancer Mc with dope minions and a wisecracking owl. What more could you ask for?
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/24895/the-necromancer-sol
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/24895/the-necromancer-sol
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#33
My newest work could use some feedback. Here is Milton, A Cyberpunk Coming of Age Tale
A LitRPG adventure with Moba and Town Building elements - Legends of the Great Savanna
A Cyberpunk Coming of Age Story - Milton
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Just started releasing, looking for critique and publicity. Started writing last Christmas and looking to improve.
Got up to 10 chapters, the first three chapters are 1.6k words, 12k words, and 2.6k words.
Scif/fantasy based on personal dreams, the apocalypse, and steeped in christian mythos.
Thank you kindly.
After Megiddo: The Book of Gideon
Got up to 10 chapters, the first three chapters are 1.6k words, 12k words, and 2.6k words.
Scif/fantasy based on personal dreams, the apocalypse, and steeped in christian mythos.
Thank you kindly.
After Megiddo: The Book of Gideon
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Wow, the second chapter is 12k long while the third one is 2.6k? The curiosity alone would have driven me to check out your story, haha.
I would appreciate a review as well, but I'm not even sure of the OP is still available and doing his rounds. My thanks in advance if your generous offer is still open, OP!
If anyone is up for exchanging reviews, please contact me. My current commitments will keep me busy for the next couple weeks, but after than I'd be more than happy to do so.
My story is Rise of the Desolate Star.
I would appreciate a review as well, but I'm not even sure of the OP is still available and doing his rounds. My thanks in advance if your generous offer is still open, OP!
If anyone is up for exchanging reviews, please contact me. My current commitments will keep me busy for the next couple weeks, but after than I'd be more than happy to do so.
My story is Rise of the Desolate Star.
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Plz help me find the point where I should focus. I'm new here and it's my first work. The story is OP/Dungeon style where dungeon elements weren't appeared yet.
The Dungeon Of A Forest God
The Dungeon Of A Forest God
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https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20951/spirit-caster-the-lost-dragon
If you get the chance to it would be appreciated!
If you get the chance to it would be appreciated!
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I've got two and there's not tons to them yet. Would love some input!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20915/load-state-01
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20993/this-fantastic-world-of-ours
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20915/load-state-01
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20993/this-fantastic-world-of-ours
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I'd love a respectable review, but I absolutely don't want you to lie just to make it seem nice.
Be honest, but know everything is still very much rough draft. :D
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/17979/embrace-the-ether
Be honest, but know everything is still very much rough draft. :D
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/17979/embrace-the-ether
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I really need someone to do a constructive review to my work. After all, one of the reasons I started writing here is for the review. Thanks in advance.
Here's the link
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20921/traum
Here's the link
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20921/traum