Re: I want to review others, but no need review trade.

#23
Seems you're buried in stories, but I should proffer mine as well:

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/18304/infigeas-online

 - The main character changes the world through careful use of optimism.
 - LitRPG in a survival-craft genre instead of a grindy RPG
 - Strong third-person limited perspective with no head hopping.
 - Few profane characters, and a profanity filter on top of that.
 - Good grammar and spelling.

Feedback thus far has been fairly positive, with the characters being the strongest element. Tell me what you think!

Re: I want to review others, but no need review trade.

#31
I'd happily take a review for my rough-draft version of Embrace the Ether.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/17979/embrace-the-ether

It's written in third-person limited. It has some cursing but its mild, and the finished product will be more heavily censored. The main character is on a quest of self-discovery as he was reborn into a completely new world of SciFi and Fantasy. Think Tower of God mixed with Warlock of the Magus World, pretty much.

If that all sounds like your speed, I'd appreciate a review.