If you have time, please read mine.

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/18755/show-and-tell

Thanks,
Felix

Worth a try, haha.

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/18729/music-masters-cd-one

Seems you're buried in stories, but I should proffer mine as well:

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/18304/infigeas-online

 - The main character changes the world through careful use of optimism.
 - LitRPG in a survival-craft genre instead of a grindy RPG
 - Strong third-person limited perspective with no head hopping.
 - Few profane characters, and a profanity filter on top of that.
 - Good grammar and spelling.

Feedback thus far has been fairly positive, with the characters being the strongest element. Tell me what you think!

Please check mine as well. <3  

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/18777

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https://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/18944/cleaning-up-the-future

I would appreciate a review of my story. It’s not a bedtime story. It’s scifi.

Thanks for your time,
23DN4L 

Would you please review mine?

https://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/18633/jadepunk

Thank you!

I’d love to jump into the mix here. My story, Party Hard, is a GameLit that focuses more on multiplayer. It has fun characters and some good action. Check it out, it has the first 3 chapters up and I’m updating it daily.

You can check mine out if you'd like. It might not be to your taste and I completely understand if it isn't. But if you'd like to leave a review or a comment you can.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/19850/bloodlines

If you're still doing reviews I would love it if you could give me an honest review of my story, only slightly more than 25 chapters in but I'd like to know where I am lacking
Link to the story is below:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/14372/sage-of-an-era

I'd happily take a review for my rough-draft version of Embrace the Ether.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/17979/embrace-the-ether

It's written in third-person limited. It has some cursing but its mild, and the finished product will be more heavily censored. The main character is on a quest of self-discovery as he was reborn into a completely new world of SciFi and Fantasy. Think Tower of God mixed with Warlock of the Magus World, pretty much.

If that all sounds like your speed, I'd appreciate a review.

If you have the time, please review mine.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20146/duality

It has some cursing, but it's also mild.