Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

#22127

Endless Wrote: 1250

Hey Buller give this a review. It’s seems under rated (meaning not rated a lot, but actually rated decently high) and I suspect it’s because of a low upload frequency. I would say it uses a little too much crude humour, internet humour, its mockery of literary references isn’t as funny as it seems to think, and the grammar could do with some work. As criticisms that is. I’m too lazy to review it rn though.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/42485/tautology?review=1057848#review-1057848
DrakanFascinating


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" uses a little too much crude humour, internet humour, its mockery of literary references isn’t as funny as it seems to think,"

Ikr

Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

#22129

Sir Wrote:
Endless Wrote: 1250

Hey Buller give this a review. It’s seems under rated (meaning not rated a lot, but actually rated decently high) and I suspect it’s because of a low upload frequency. I would say it uses a little too much crude humour, internet humour, its mockery of literary references isn’t as funny as it seems to think, and the grammar could do with some work. As criticisms that is. I’m too lazy to review it rn though.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/42485/tautology?review=1057848#review-1057848
DrakanFascinating


1248

" uses a little too much crude humour, internet humour, its mockery of literary references isn’t as funny as it seems to think,"

Ikr
1244

Lol
DrakanFascinating