New Novel/Character Idea (Need feedback)
As for the protagonist, the idea is pretty good. It is not too complicated and easy to relate to. There isn’t much else I can say about it except to give it a shot.
but, why cant he become a swordsman? i mean, does inheriting magick give physical handicap or other disadvantage, ?
if not, he can become a normal swordsman like any others, cant he? i believe his healing will boost his survival rate and reduce his dependendcy towards healers.
in games, it's like paladin or monk or holy swordsman class
you can set the story with that issue as conflict. In the early stages as he is mastering his powers and still practicing the sword he can't quite..merge the style..you know what I mean?
As his story unfolds as he will (undoubtedly) be sent on some kind of quest, we start to see him learn how to merge his healing magic with his fighting style. And have his support characters teach him a few things.
And don't forget your theme! Our MC is going to start one way, and by the end of your story he should be a better person, in someway ^_^
and give him a love interest, a kuudere type..i like those girls -_-
u said ur mc want o be a melee fighter, but inheriting healing magick ruins his chance. Why is that?
unless u change ur mind, that ur mc no longer want to be a melee from the start, u have to be able to explain this basic question, eventually.
Quote:It might be a basic question, however it involves giving away a major plot point. Note, I said swordsman not melee fighter.
No, u said "My protagonist dreamed of being a swordsman, thief or assassin as a child" - those three are basically melee fighter.
Alright, I didn't mean you have to answer it here, as long you can answer it within your story