RE: Art/Requests/Characters

#43
05/16/2015 01:37:02Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/09/2015 21:57:49raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/09/2015 03:27:14raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]


scary....

here is the final. enjoy!
http://sta.sh/02d26ssgvblq


Sorry for the very late reply.
I was so caught up rereading LMS, DD, SS and so on :D
Thanks for making my work gory (mwahahaha)

I've been trying to do my best in coloring
http://sta.sh/02alo6erzle3
it's not as good as yours but it's something(?)
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you want me to color him? and if so whats the thing on his head...... it looks..... clowdy

RE: Art/Requests/Characters

#44
05/16/2015 21:58:41raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 01:37:02Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/09/2015 21:57:49raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/09/2015 03:27:14raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]


scary....

here is the final. enjoy!
http://sta.sh/02d26ssgvblq


Sorry for the very late reply.
I was so caught up rereading LMS, DD, SS and so on :D
Thanks for making my work gory (mwahahaha)

I've been trying to do my best in coloring
http://sta.sh/02alo6erzle3
it's not as good as yours but it's something(?)


you want me to color him? and if so whats the thing on his head...... it looks..... clowdy
[/quote]

Here's the final result:
http://non-exist3nt.deviantart.com/art/Trial-Color-2-533337220
I rid off the cloud(lol) it was supposed to be snow (T-T).
It end up as a really weird snow on his head.
I just want to get your honest opinion in my coloring skill especially the color of his clothes and his face.
That is, if you have free time :D. Thanks in advance.

RE: Art/Requests/Characters

#45
05/16/2015 23:14:48Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 21:58:41raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 01:37:02Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/09/2015 21:57:49raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/09/2015 03:27:14raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]


scary....

here is the final. enjoy!
http://sta.sh/02d26ssgvblq


Sorry for the very late reply.
I was so caught up rereading LMS, DD, SS and so on :D
Thanks for making my work gory (mwahahaha)

I've been trying to do my best in coloring
http://sta.sh/02alo6erzle3
it's not as good as yours but it's something(?)


you want me to color him? and if so whats the thing on his head...... it looks..... clowdy


Here's the final result:
http://non-exist3nt.deviantart.com/art/Trial-Color-2-533337220
I rid off the cloud(lol) it was supposed to be snow (T-T).
It end up as a really weird snow on his head.
I just want to get your honest opinion in my coloring skill especially the color of his clothes and his face.
That is, if you have free time :D. Thanks in advance.
[/quote]

ok! heres my take: The cloth should generate more shadows, the yellow belt/scarf should be darker around the edges, his head should generate a shadow on his neck, you are very talented with hair( I absolutely hate hair!), and his expression is perfect! very sarcastic/arrogant. overall I feel like darker colors would be better on his cloths but that may not be possible with the tools your using. bright colors just seems too happy with a bloody blade.

RE: Art/Requests/Characters

#46
05/17/2015 01:08:32raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 23:14:48Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 21:58:41raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 01:37:02Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/09/2015 21:57:49raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]scary....

here is the final. enjoy!
http://sta.sh/02d26ssgvblq


Sorry for the very late reply.
I was so caught up rereading LMS, DD, SS and so on :D
Thanks for making my work gory (mwahahaha)

I've been trying to do my best in coloring
http://sta.sh/02alo6erzle3
it's not as good as yours but it's something(?)


you want me to color him? and if so whats the thing on his head...... it looks..... clowdy


Here's the final result:
http://non-exist3nt.deviantart.com/art/Trial-Color-2-533337220
I rid off the cloud(lol) it was supposed to be snow (T-T).
It end up as a really weird snow on his head.
I just want to get your honest opinion in my coloring skill especially the color of his clothes and his face.
That is, if you have free time :D. Thanks in advance.


ok! heres my take: The cloth should generate more shadows, the yellow belt/scarf should be darker around the edges, his head should generate a shadow on his neck, you are very talented with hair( I absolutely hate hair!), and his expression is perfect! very sarcastic/arrogant. overall I feel like darker colors would be better on his cloths but that may not be possible with the tools your using. bright colors  just seems too happy with a bloody blade.
[/quote]

Thanks (again:D ) for your honest reply, you have enlighten me and shown me the ways to level up my coloring skill. 
For now, my Coloring skill is beginner Lv2 - 50.75% *wink*.
I'm using tablet with pen(sketchbook app) to draw and color(huehuehue).
This is the reason my drawings look like what they are right now.

RE: Art/Requests/Characters

#47
05/17/2015 10:57:08Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/17/2015 01:08:32raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 23:14:48Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 21:58:41raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 01:37:02Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]here is the final. enjoy!
http://sta.sh/02d26ssgvblq


Sorry for the very late reply.
I was so caught up rereading LMS, DD, SS and so on :D
Thanks for making my work gory (mwahahaha)

I've been trying to do my best in coloring
http://sta.sh/02alo6erzle3
it's not as good as yours but it's something(?)


you want me to color him? and if so whats the thing on his head...... it looks..... clowdy


Here's the final result:
http://non-exist3nt.deviantart.com/art/Trial-Color-2-533337220
I rid off the cloud(lol) it was supposed to be snow (T-T).
It end up as a really weird snow on his head.
I just want to get your honest opinion in my coloring skill especially the color of his clothes and his face.
That is, if you have free time :D. Thanks in advance.


ok! heres my take: The cloth should generate more shadows, the yellow belt/scarf should be darker around the edges, his head should generate a shadow on his neck, you are very talented with hair( I absolutely hate hair!), and his expression is perfect! very sarcastic/arrogant. overall I feel like darker colors would be better on his cloths but that may not be possible with the tools your using. bright colors  just seems too happy with a bloody blade.


Thanks (again:D ) for your honest reply, you have enlighten me and shown me the ways to level up my coloring skill. 
For now, my Coloring skill is beginner Lv2 - 50.75% *wink*.
I'm using tablet with pen(sketchbook app) to draw and color(huehuehue).
This is the reason my drawings look like what they are right now.
[/quote]
now its your turn. how do improve the linework and detail on this?

http://raz0r151.deviantart.com/art/Assassin-Speed-paint-533627397

RE: Art/Requests/Characters

#48
05/17/2015 15:56:39raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/17/2015 10:57:08Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/17/2015 01:08:32raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 23:14:48Botyok Wrote: [ -> ]
05/16/2015 21:58:41raz0r151 Wrote: [ -> ]Sorry for the very late reply.
I was so caught up rereading LMS, DD, SS and so on :D
Thanks for making my work gory (mwahahaha)

I've been trying to do my best in coloring
http://sta.sh/02alo6erzle3
it's not as good as yours but it's something(?)


you want me to color him? and if so whats the thing on his head...... it looks..... clowdy


Here's the final result:
http://non-exist3nt.deviantart.com/art/Trial-Color-2-533337220
I rid off the cloud(lol) it was supposed to be snow (T-T).
It end up as a really weird snow on his head.
I just want to get your honest opinion in my coloring skill especially the color of his clothes and his face.
That is, if you have free time :D. Thanks in advance.


ok! heres my take: The cloth should generate more shadows, the yellow belt/scarf should be darker around the edges, his head should generate a shadow on his neck, you are very talented with hair( I absolutely hate hair!), and his expression is perfect! very sarcastic/arrogant. overall I feel like darker colors would be better on his cloths but that may not be possible with the tools your using. bright colors  just seems too happy with a bloody blade.


Thanks (again:D ) for your honest reply, you have enlighten me and shown me the ways to level up my coloring skill. 
For now, my Coloring skill is beginner Lv2 - 50.75% *wink*.
I'm using tablet with pen(sketchbook app) to draw and color(huehuehue).
This is the reason my drawings look like what they are right now.

now its your turn. how do improve the linework and detail on this?

http://raz0r151.deviantart.com/art/Assassin-Speed-paint-533627397
[/quote]

First thing first, I should let you know that:  http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/234/739/fa5.jpg


I'm not an "expert" in lineart(Beginner Lv4, clearly not an expert) much more the details(I'm too lazy, lol) but I will advice you using my own experience(today as I recreate a downgraded version of your work, sorry OTL). 
About the linework, along with the brush you also apply pencil/ ball pen (something with smaller point) to enforce the 
outline of your drawing(so it would also look more detail and less messy :D). 

http://sta.sh/01aw83w9i13i (It's unfinished)
You can see the effect of the ball pen (forgot to write  it in there) Vs. pure brush.
Sorry, if I'm going towards Subzero color(though the head only 'cause I give up midway-I'm a pig and pigs don't do much)