Guys, i wrote a fiction on RR, based on oriental mysterious style.
It includes magic tamer,friendship, love, betrayal and intelligence fighting, and so on
Until now, almost 10K words uploaded, really hope to get advice from you~
Thanks a lot~

Oriental mysterious style?? ... Are you talking about cultivation?

batotit Wrote: Oriental mysterious style?? ... Are you talking about cultivation?

Almost, but not exactly~

You need a cover, a better rating, and perhaps a review or two 

Say...

Would this work as a cover for you: 

It works~ thank you so much~

Ellaliao110 Wrote: It works~ thank you so much~

Update your signature so it won't show the empty picture :) 

It works, thank you very much!

Tamer Thena Morr

beast_regards Wrote:

Ellaliao110 Wrote: It works~ thank you so much~

Update your signature so it won't show the empty picture :)

I got it updated~it is so kind of you~twinkle~twinkle

Ellaliao110 Wrote: I got it updated~it is so kind of you~twinkle~twinkle

I also wrote a review for you - with the decent rating so your story can have a better start. The writing style looks like it can use some work, but I like the story itself. 

It wouldn't hurt if your story gained some more views. You will see if the cover helped attracting views when you next update. Or try to do a few review swaps with other authors. 

Alternatively, you can try to promote your story here. 

https://www.royalroad.com/forums/5689

Tamer Thena Morr is the story about the beast taming, magic, friendship, love, betrayal and more..
Betrayal will be somehow in the future, not at beginning of the novel, so you can not see it now is right.
All of these tags will be happened on the way to her growth,not her history.
Actually,i donot know how to review for your book after i saw yours for mine.
I am afraid that i will make mistake on review of your novel. 
Do you mind that?

Ellaliao110 Wrote: Betrayal will be somehow in the future, not at beginning of the novel, so you can not see it now is right.

1st chapter should be it. Unless it is taking part in the future (which can be, some novels are written like this) 

Ellaliao110 Wrote: Actually,i donot know how to review for your book after i saw yours for mine.

What you don't know? 

beast_regards Wrote:

Ellaliao110 Wrote: Betrayal will be somehow in the future, not at beginning of the novel, so you can not see it now is right.

1st chapter should be it. Unless it is taking part in the future (which can be, some novels are written like this) 

Ellaliao110 Wrote: Actually,i donot know how to review for your book after i saw yours for mine.

What you don't know?

i already done review on one of yr book, magical girl too,ah?

Ellaliao110 Wrote: Ellaliao110 Wrote:
Betrayal will be somehow in the future, not at beginning of the novel, so you can not see it now is right.
1st chapter should be it. Unless it is taking part in the future (which can be, some novels are written like this)

betrayal will be happened as the story is going on,because i already wrote a story outline on my own computer,hah~~
Most of the first part of the story is not essential, but it is necessary for the story going on.

Ellaliao110 Wrote: i already done review on one of yr book, magical girl too,ah?

You mean a comment? I see what you meant by confused. Let's leave this at that :-) 
Thank you.