A scene in my newest chapter turned into what might be funny or a I worry that it might be sexist against men. In that the men are under a sleeping spell and the women need to wake them up.  You'll see what I mean if you read it. After I wrote it I was realizing that ooh that might not be good.

Adult joke so maybe 18+ only to read it for now just to be safe.

Would anyone be willing to read this part of the chapter? I want this done in private messages so I don't give the chapter away before it's published, so please pm if you feel like helping. Thank you.  

Note: Usually the characters are pretty serious so I'm not sure where this came from but if it turns out to be okay I'll let it stay. Random is good imop.

I shall grant thee the wisdom of the mighty.

If it fits, it sits.

Usually meant for cats, but the words of a character with a specific personality work as well. If it's something they'd say, let them say it.

Buller Wrote: I shall grant thee the wisdom of the mighty.

If it fits, it sits.

Usually meant for cats, but the words of a character with a specific personality work as well. If it's something they'd say, let them say it.

Thank you very much!

Dusty Times?

Capaluchu Wrote: Dusty Times?

Nope, the unpublished chapter 33. (It's 800 something words so far.) Oh I better give it a title, hum maybie Slipery when wet? xD ahahah. *cough sputter*

I'm amazed how fast people in here are replying now, (Woot!) I remember having to wait days for a reply. 

darkocean Wrote: I'm amazed how fast people in here are replying now, (Woot!) I remember having to wait days for a reply.

I'm avoiding work today.  I already put in 52 hours this week.  Kinda done.

I'm happy to read it but I am pretty new so I am not sure how to do that?