Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

#2
Hello!

I'm down for a review swap! My story 'That One Isekai' is a chaotic satire of Isekai, LitRPG, and Anime in general. 

10k words is Chapter 7, but I recommend reading at least until Chapter 14 to get more of a full experience of what the rest of the story's like stylistically, since the first few chapters are a lot more experimental.

About which chapter does your story kick in? I find that a lot of the time, 10k words is still barely even out of the introduction, so I prefer to get an actual feel for the story before I review it, so it's not just "Hmm yes, this is a story."

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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MezzoCatorce Wrote: Hello!

I'm down for a review swap! My story 'That One Isekai' is a chaotic satire of Isekai, LitRPG, and Anime in general. 

10k words is Chapter 7, but I recommend reading at least until Chapter 14 to get more of a full experience of what the rest of the story's like stylistically, since the first few chapters are a lot more experimental.

About which chapter does your story kick in? I find that a lot of the time, 10k words is still barely even out of the introduction, so I prefer to get an actual feel for the story before I review it, so it's not just "Hmm yes, this is a story."

I am up to read until chapter 14.  I'll get review done by Sunday if that's ok.

As to when my story kicks in, that would be chapter 9 or 11.  Your choice which one.

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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Arthur Wrote:
Eric Wrote: Happy New Year! 

Hoping to get some reviews for my novel, and so I'm looking to do some swaps!   10k words would be from Chapter 4.

I'm open to doing any genre in return!

Love that cover! I would be down if you are interested, my 10k mark is at chapter 6, just let me know!

Alright, sounds good.  I will doing reviews in the order people responded, so I should be done by late Sunday.  (got a lot of reading to do this weekend, lol)

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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Eric Wrote:
M.D. Wrote: Sure I'm down to do a review swap! 10k words for my work is up through chapter 3 but the story really starts to pick up at chapter four and onwards.

Alright, why don't we both read to chapter 6?

I'll get the review done by Sunday if you agree.
Alright sounds good to me! Consider it done!
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Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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Eric Wrote: Happy New Year! 

Hoping to get some reviews for my novel, and so I'm looking to do some swaps!   10k words would be from Chapter 4.

I'm open to doing any genre in return!

Id love to get some love for The Adventurer's Guild, so how about one for that in exchange?

Also, I would love to throw some comments between each other.  (especially if its those reaction comments I sometimes see in stuff, like "No!  You done it now Villain A!" or "Oh, well crap, that guys dead now", or "Did they really think that was a good idea?!  Really?!", or other things like thatt, because those kinds of comments always make me laugh and tickle my funnybone.  lol

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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Ruuyi Wrote:
Eric Wrote: Happy New Year! 

Hoping to get some reviews for my novel, and so I'm looking to do some swaps!   10k words would be from Chapter 4.

I'm open to doing any genre in return!

Id love to get some love for The Adventurer's Guild, so how about one for that in exchange?

Also, I would love to throw some comments between each other.  (especially if its those reaction comments I sometimes see in stuff, like "No!  You done it now Villain A!" or "Oh, well crap, that guys dead now", or "Did they really think that was a good idea?!  Really?!", or other things like thatt, because those kinds of comments always make me laugh and tickle my funnybone.  lol

Sure, I love to read the The Adventurer's Guild.  I'll get the review done by monday.

(reaction comments?  What does this mean?  Reading closely seems that he wants me to play a villain and threaten people...   Wait, there's a name for this.  It's chuunibyou, isn't?  ...  Just read his book, do the review, and don't think about the rest.  Yea, that's the ticket.)

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Edit:  Some kind soul explained you wanted to trade comments on the stories rather than here.  That makes a lot more sense, and sure I am game for it.

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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Eric Wrote:
MezzoCatorce Wrote: Hello!

I'm down for a review swap! My story 'That One Isekai' is a chaotic satire of Isekai, LitRPG, and Anime in general. 

10k words is Chapter 7, but I recommend reading at least until Chapter 14 to get more of a full experience of what the rest of the story's like stylistically, since the first few chapters are a lot more experimental.

About which chapter does your story kick in? I find that a lot of the time, 10k words is still barely even out of the introduction, so I prefer to get an actual feel for the story before I review it, so it's not just "Hmm yes, this is a story."

I am up to read until chapter 14.  I'll get review done by Sunday if that's ok.

As to when my story kicks in, that would be chapter 9 or 11.  Your choice which one.

Sounds good! I'm not in a hurry, and I usually take a few days to do my reviews as well, so take your time.

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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Eric Wrote:
Ruuyi Wrote:
Eric Wrote: Happy New Year! 

Hoping to get some reviews for my novel, and so I'm looking to do some swaps!   10k words would be from Chapter 4.

I'm open to doing any genre in return!

Id love to get some love for The Adventurer's Guild, so how about one for that in exchange?

Also, I would love to throw some comments between each other.  (especially if its those reaction comments I sometimes see in stuff, like "No!  You done it now Villain A!" or "Oh, well crap, that guys dead now", or "Did they really think that was a good idea?!  Really?!", or other things like thatt, because those kinds of comments always make me laugh and tickle my funnybone.  lol

Sure, I love to read the The Adventurer's Guild.  I'll get the review done by monday.

(reaction comments?  What does this mean?  Reading closely seems that he wants me to play a villain and threaten people...   Wait, there's a name for this.  It's chuunibyou, isn't?  ...  Just read his book, do the review, and don't think about the rest.  Yea, that's the ticket.)

I think he's saying that he would also like to trade comments on the stories, and prefers it when people react to the events of the story rather than generic "TFTC" type comments.

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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MezzoCatorce Wrote:
Eric Wrote:
Ruuyi Wrote:
Eric Wrote: Happy New Year! 

Hoping to get some reviews for my novel, and so I'm looking to do some swaps!   10k words would be from Chapter 4.

I'm open to doing any genre in return!

Id love to get some love for The Adventurer's Guild, so how about one for that in exchange?

Also, I would love to throw some comments between each other.  (especially if its those reaction comments I sometimes see in stuff, like "No!  You done it now Villain A!" or "Oh, well crap, that guys dead now", or "Did they really think that was a good idea?!  Really?!", or other things like thatt, because those kinds of comments always make me laugh and tickle my funnybone.  lol

Sure, I love to read the The Adventurer's Guild.  I'll get the review done by monday.

(reaction comments?  What does this mean?  Reading closely seems that he wants me to play a villain and threaten people...   Wait, there's a name for this.  It's chuunibyou, isn't?  ...  Just read his book, do the review, and don't think about the rest.  Yea, that's the ticket.)

I think he's saying that he would also like to trade comments on the stories, and prefers it when people react to the events of the story rather than generic "TFTC" type comments.

Yep!  Especially comments that are fun and comedic to read.  Iv always enjoyed reading those comments at the end of a chapter in other stuff I have read, its always so much fun.   lol

Re: Review Swaps! [ongoing]

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MezzoCatorce Wrote:
Eric Wrote:
Ruuyi Wrote:
Eric Wrote: Happy New Year! 

Hoping to get some reviews for my novel, and so I'm looking to do some swaps!   10k words would be from Chapter 4.

I'm open to doing any genre in return!

Id love to get some love for The Adventurer's Guild, so how about one for that in exchange?

Also, I would love to throw some comments between each other.  (especially if its those reaction comments I sometimes see in stuff, like "No!  You done it now Villain A!" or "Oh, well crap, that guys dead now", or "Did they really think that was a good idea?!  Really?!", or other things like thatt, because those kinds of comments always make me laugh and tickle my funnybone.  lol

Sure, I love to read the The Adventurer's Guild.  I'll get the review done by monday.

(reaction comments?  What does this mean?  Reading closely seems that he wants me to play a villain and threaten people...   Wait, there's a name for this.  It's chuunibyou, isn't?  ...  Just read his book, do the review, and don't think about the rest.  Yea, that's the ticket.)

I think he's saying that he would also like to trade comments on the stories, and prefers it when people react to the events of the story rather than generic "TFTC" type comments.
Ah, thanks.  I really didn't get it, lol.