Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire

#1
I'm rolling out my huge Torth series here


The Majority always gets what it wants. Thomas just wishes the galactic mob known as the Majority didn’t want him. There’s no way to escape thirty trillion mind readers, no way to refuse them, no way to hide from a collective that owns the top technology and best minds in existence, no way to pretend that he’s just like his foster family and other average Americans... 

- Disabled MC 
- Dual protagonists, one brain one brawn. Both become super OP. 
- Sci-Fi with a magic system for superpowers.
- First 10k takes place on current day Earth. (Characters get abducted & thrown into an alien city around the 18k mark.)


DrakanGlasses 
Looking to do review swaps with writers who have a solid grasp of grammar/spelling (because I compulsively correct typos, I can't stop myself from doing it). I'd like to check out your fiction before committing to a swap! I'm not picky about subgenre; I read widely in SFF. 
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Re: Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire

#2
AbbyBabble Wrote: I'm rolling out my huge Torth series here


The Majority always gets what it wants. Thomas just wishes the galactic mob known as the Majority didn’t want him. There’s no way to escape thirty trillion mind readers, no way to refuse them, no way to hide from a collective that owns the top technology and best minds in existence, no way to pretend that he’s just like his foster family and other average Americans... 

- Disabled MC 
- Dual protagonists, one brain one brawn. Both become super OP. 
- Sci-Fi with a magic system for superpowers.
- First 10k takes place on current day Earth. (Characters get abducted & thrown into an alien city around the 18k mark.)


DrakanGlasses 
Looking to do review swaps with writers who have a solid grasp of grammar/spelling (because I compulsively correct typos, I can't stop myself from doing it). I'd like to check out your fiction before committing to a swap! I'm not picky about subgenre; I read widely in SFF.
I left a small review, sorry for not showing you my story first. Your story was so good that I read all chapters in one sitting, and it felt right to leave a review for the story.

You are free to disregard the swap; I have already received enjoyment, which is sufficient reward. If you want to do the swap, my story is  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/49160/duty-empty-dreams-and-trying-not-to-become-a-monster

Re: Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire

#4
GBScally Wrote: As a disabled writer, I'd love to read a story  with a protagonist like yours. Would you be interested in a litrpg fantasy story?

Please check mine out and let me know if you're interested.

Sure! I've seen yours before, and had it on my reading list. I'm pretty short on reading time this week (3x per day posting schedule plus day job and other stuff). But I will make it a priority! 
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Re: Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire

#5
AbbyBabble Wrote:
GBScally Wrote: As a disabled writer, I'd love to read a story  with a protagonist like yours. Would you be interested in a litrpg fantasy story?

Please check mine out and let me know if you're interested.

Sure! I've seen yours before, and had it on my reading list. I'm pretty short on reading time this week (3x per day posting schedule plus day job and other stuff). But I will make it a priority!
I understand not having much time for reading. 

And I'll try to get to yours this week as well.