Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire
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I'm rolling out my huge Torth series here.
The Majority always gets what it wants. Thomas just wishes the galactic mob known as the Majority didn’t want him. There’s no way to escape thirty trillion mind readers, no way to refuse them, no way to hide from a collective that owns the top technology and best minds in existence, no way to pretend that he’s just like his foster family and other average Americans...
- Disabled MC
- Dual protagonists, one brain one brawn. Both become super OP.
- Sci-Fi with a magic system for superpowers.
- First 10k takes place on current day Earth. (Characters get abducted & thrown into an alien city around the 18k mark.)
Looking to do review swaps with writers who have a solid grasp of grammar/spelling (because I compulsively correct typos, I can't stop myself from doing it). I'd like to check out your fiction before committing to a swap! I'm not picky about subgenre; I read widely in SFF.
The Majority always gets what it wants. Thomas just wishes the galactic mob known as the Majority didn’t want him. There’s no way to escape thirty trillion mind readers, no way to refuse them, no way to hide from a collective that owns the top technology and best minds in existence, no way to pretend that he’s just like his foster family and other average Americans...
- Disabled MC
- Dual protagonists, one brain one brawn. Both become super OP.
- Sci-Fi with a magic system for superpowers.
- First 10k takes place on current day Earth. (Characters get abducted & thrown into an alien city around the 18k mark.)

Looking to do review swaps with writers who have a solid grasp of grammar/spelling (because I compulsively correct typos, I can't stop myself from doing it). I'd like to check out your fiction before committing to a swap! I'm not picky about subgenre; I read widely in SFF.
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#2AbbyBabble Wrote: I'm rolling out my huge Torth series here.I left a small review, sorry for not showing you my story first. Your story was so good that I read all chapters in one sitting, and it felt right to leave a review for the story.
The Majority always gets what it wants. Thomas just wishes the galactic mob known as the Majority didn’t want him. There’s no way to escape thirty trillion mind readers, no way to refuse them, no way to hide from a collective that owns the top technology and best minds in existence, no way to pretend that he’s just like his foster family and other average Americans...
- Disabled MC
- Dual protagonists, one brain one brawn. Both become super OP.
- Sci-Fi with a magic system for superpowers.
- First 10k takes place on current day Earth. (Characters get abducted & thrown into an alien city around the 18k mark.)
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Looking to do review swaps with writers who have a solid grasp of grammar/spelling (because I compulsively correct typos, I can't stop myself from doing it). I'd like to check out your fiction before committing to a swap! I'm not picky about subgenre; I read widely in SFF.
You are free to disregard the swap; I have already received enjoyment, which is sufficient reward. If you want to do the swap, my story is https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/49160/duty-empty-dreams-and-trying-not-to-become-a-monster
Re: Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire
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As a disabled writer, I'd love to read a story with a protagonist like yours. Would you be interested in a litrpg fantasy story?
Please check mine out and let me know if you're interested.
Please check mine out and let me know if you're interested.
Re: Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire
#4GBScally Wrote: As a disabled writer, I'd love to read a story with a protagonist like yours. Would you be interested in a litrpg fantasy story?
Please check mine out and let me know if you're interested.
Sure! I've seen yours before, and had it on my reading list. I'm pretty short on reading time this week (3x per day posting schedule plus day job and other stuff). But I will make it a priority!
Re: Review Swap for Brain + Brawn vs Oppressive Galactic Empire
#5AbbyBabble Wrote:I understand not having much time for reading.GBScally Wrote: As a disabled writer, I'd love to read a story with a protagonist like yours. Would you be interested in a litrpg fantasy story?
Please check mine out and let me know if you're interested.
Sure! I've seen yours before, and had it on my reading list. I'm pretty short on reading time this week (3x per day posting schedule plus day job and other stuff). But I will make it a priority!
And I'll try to get to yours this week as well.