Hanne Wrote: just read a little and I like it. Might as well do a review and comments swap.

my story is in the sig. I'm okay with waiting. No rush

What point in your story is a good stopping point so that I get the 'gist' of it? A lot of the stories I've done swaps for so far don't even get into the meat of the story by 10k words. I usually try to read further to give an actual review, since I've seen a lot of swaps that just review the introduction and go "Hmm yes, this will probably be a story."

MezzoCatorce Wrote: What point in your story is a good stopping point so that I get the 'gist' of it? A lot of the stories I've done swaps for so far don't even get into the meat of the story by 10k words. I usually try to read further to give an actual review, since I've seen a lot of swaps that just review the introduction and go "Hmm yes, this will probably be a story."

I can't ask more than chapter 5 or 6. The story is a bit educational, a response against the commonly mistaken medieval trope. So, I have to make it historically accurate and for that reason, I can't rush to the big battle. I've tried to make a rushed start and my readers hated it, they prefer the slow start (imagine...)

Done with Inis, moving on to Horizon of War and Death Smith, if Osirium was still interested.

Hi, i'm interested in a review swap, too! My story takes part in the Pokéworld and is about a Young orphan girl who not only meets her first pokémon but also falls into the hand of radical anti-government opponents who will use any means to achieve their goals. Even if it means training a young girl and her pokemon to become a weapon of war. A slightly darker take on the Pokeverse, if you will.

As i already read, that fanfictions are not your trope its cool for me, if you're not interested. Still thought, i'd give it a try ;)

Kind regards