Offering reviews

I have been stagnant at 135 reviews for far too long. I'm not currently working on any serious writing project, and feel like I have some time to kill, so I figured, why not finally do this.


I have few prerequisites going into this.

1) You must be willing to take on constructive criticism. I am trying to become better at leaving honest reviews. I won't go out of my way to give you low stars, but I will call out things that I believe don't work well and offer suggestions. If you are someone who is not good at getting potentially negative feedback, you need not apply.

2) Story must be at least 10 chapters and ongoing/completed. I reserve the right to stop reading when I want for my review, but ten chapters at least shows me you're not trying to jump the gun on getting praise.

3) Be aware that I will probably also comment on every chapter I read. This is more a warning than anything.


136. The Last Philosopher (done)
137. Tenth Authors Journal (done)
138. The Chainbreaker (done)
139. Precipice (done)
140. Transciety (done)
141. Burden of a Fire Dragon (done)
142. Galactiquest
143. Heroes of Tomorrow
144. Fiends for Hire
145. The Butterfly Effect
146. Order Slayer
147. Shipcore
148.Godclads
149. The Silver Path
150. Undying Emperor
151. Duty Empty Dreams
152. The Partisan Chronicles
153. Second Chance Apocalypse
154. The Semaphore
155. Voyage of the Mindbender
156. Dishonor
157. Golder Retriever
158. Empire of Night

Zaq Wrote: I have few prerequisites going into this.

1) You must be willing to take on constructive criticism. I am trying to become better at leaving honest reviews. I won't go out of my way to give you low stars, but I will call out things that I believe don't work well and offer suggestions. If you are someone who is not good at getting potentially negative feedback, you need not apply.

2) Story must be at least 10 chapters and ongoing/completed. I reserve the right to stop reading when I want for my review, but ten chapters at least shows me you're not trying to jump the gun on getting praise.

3) Be aware that I will probably also comment on every chapter I read. This is more a warning than anything.

Hi, I'd like a review, and I think if anything I'm better at taking constructive criticism than flattery, it makes me uncomfortable.
Anyway, the story is in the signature. Thanks in advance.

Hi, I am looking for a review for my story, hope you can do mine. About criticism, I can take it no matter how harsh. Thank you
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/58797/tenth-authors-journal-book-2a

I don't have ten chapters yet, I will in 5 days though. And I'd love constructive criticism on my current novel Miner Devil. My other novels got consistently 3 followers per chapter but this one got ten at the start and then nothing. Views coming in but nobody is staying so I must be doing something wrong I think. It might be the villainous MC.

Sly Wrote: I don't have ten chapters yet, I will in 5 days though. And I'd love constructive criticism on my current novel Miner Devil. My other novels got consistently 3 followers per chapter but this one got ten at the start and then nothing. Views coming in but nobody is staying so I must be doing something wrong I think. It might be the villainous MC.

People around here love a villain mc.
But yeah, reach out to me once 10 is up, and I'll add it to the list. And if I run out of stuff before then, I'll try and remember.

I'll add mine here, a freebie is a freebie.

Throwing my story into the ring, I'll never say no to some good feedback. If you would give it a read, I'd be honoured.

My latest endeavor, entitled TRANSCIETY, has yet to be reviewed. Perhaps you'd like to be the first! 



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I always appreciate reviews, comments, and constructive feedback on my stories. Here are my two stories, so you can pick whichever you prefer!

Burden of a Fire Dragon is an ongoing fantasy story that follows a duo of captured, baby dragons.

Fragment of a Dragon Soul has one book complete and currently taking a break for now. It's a fantasy / sci-fi mix with game elements. (As the author, I'm actually super torn about parts in this story, so constructive criticism could be eagerly implemented.)

Thanks for doing this review thread!

Here is my novel:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51003/8-the-infinite

Cynical Wrote: Here is my novel:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51003/8-the-infinite

Gonna go out on a limb and say you didn't read the post in its entirety

Zaq Wrote:

Cynical Wrote: Here is my novel:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51003/8-the-infinite

Gonna go out on a limb and say you didn't read the post in its entirety

Ho, 10 chapters minimum, my bad, never mind then.

Free is free. Here's mine and thanks in advance!

Ahoy!

Heroes of Tomorrow is the story I'd like reviewed, it's in my blurb. The honesty and review is appreciated.

slok Wrote: Ahoy!

Heroes of Tomorrow is the story I'd like reviewed, it's in my blurb. The honesty and review is appreciated.

Sounds like a sloking good time.

Go for it if you think mine's one you'd be interested in. My chapters are quite long though, lol

Thanks for doing these! Could you review The Butterfly Effect?

hi it's in my sig, it's pretty long already so you don't have to read all the chapters if you don't want to

I will throw my hat in the ring. A review would be great! Especially interested in the chapter comments. If you can tell me what I did wrong so I can work on it, and tell me what worked so I can do more, I'd be very appreciative!

ShipCore

Sure. I’d welcome critiques to my work. If you see anything you like or don’t like, feel free to let me know. Only work’s in the sig.