I am new to writing so I would love any pointers/tips!
I'm certain now that I'm in the swing of things, I could have done better for the start, so an edit based on feedback might not be a bad idea.
Either of my fictions is perfectly fine, but I think The Guardian can use a bit more polishing than Ashes, tbh.
But please do whichever you are more drawn to.
Thank you and big congrats on RS <3