A Free Reviews for first five people, round 4 [CLOSED]
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Here we go again.
I offer the first five people who respond to this thread a free review of their story.
I can’t promise I will read your entire story, however, you will, in the worst-case scenario I’ll read at least a couple of chapters and you will receive a simple review.
If your story sparks my interest, I’ll write an advanced review instead.
Since I don't have a story of my own, this is not a review swap, only thing to get a review is to reply to this thread and ask. You just need to be among the first five people.
Once again, I would ask the favor: What about if you reviewed the story of the person above you? If you don't want to, you don't have to, though it would be nice if you did.
The only thing you have to do is to be among the first five people who reply to this thread.
And closed, with the five people who replied fastest below.
I offer the first five people who respond to this thread a free review of their story.
I can’t promise I will read your entire story, however, you will, in the worst-case scenario I’ll read at least a couple of chapters and you will receive a simple review.
If your story sparks my interest, I’ll write an advanced review instead.
Since I don't have a story of my own, this is not a review swap, only thing to get a review is to reply to this thread and ask. You just need to be among the first five people.
Once again, I would ask the favor: What about if you reviewed the story of the person above you? If you don't want to, you don't have to, though it would be nice if you did.
The only thing you have to do is to be among the first five people who reply to this thread.
And closed, with the five people who replied fastest below.
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I would love a review if you feel up for it :)
Playing with the Dead is the current fiction I'm writing
Playing with the Dead is the current fiction I'm writing
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I will like to jump on this wagon.
Your choices are,
Parallel Hearts(Book 1)
—> This here is the easiest to read, as it is a gateway.
Queen of Monsters(GameLit)
Solem et Lunam(Yuri)
—> This one is lighter.
Vita et Mors(Yuri)
—> This one is more heavy and horror themed to say.
Sins of Reality
—> A short story of 12k words.
—> Located underneath its own volume in ‘Parallel Hearts: Short Stories’.
—> You’ll get a good grasp of the series from this one.
Your choice on whichever you want to review. None are casual reads, just letting you know.
Your choices are,
Parallel Hearts(Book 1)
—> This here is the easiest to read, as it is a gateway.
Queen of Monsters(GameLit)
Solem et Lunam(Yuri)
—> This one is lighter.
Vita et Mors(Yuri)
—> This one is more heavy and horror themed to say.
Sins of Reality
—> A short story of 12k words.
—> Located underneath its own volume in ‘Parallel Hearts: Short Stories’.
—> You’ll get a good grasp of the series from this one.
Your choice on whichever you want to review. None are casual reads, just letting you know.




Parallel Hearts: Follow the Story of Cyra, and Her Path to Becoming the True Enemy[Anti-Hero/Dark Portal Fantasy]
Parallel Hearts(Book 1)—> Complete.
Parallel Hearts: Cursed Memories(Book 2)— Complete.
Parallel Hearts: Ill-Fated Heart(Book 3 - Reconstructing—> Image is the Cover)
Queen of Monsters(GameLit)—> Complete.
Solem et Lunam(Yuri)—> Complete.
Vita et Mors(Yuri)—> Complete.
Azure Night(Yuri)—> Complete.
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Oh! I volunteer as tribute!
With that said, The Stormcrow Cycle is a very slow, slice-of-life romance-fantasy, so if that's not your speed, feel free to give it a pass. =)
Thanks for doing these reviews! You're awesome!
With that said, The Stormcrow Cycle is a very slow, slice-of-life romance-fantasy, so if that's not your speed, feel free to give it a pass. =)
Thanks for doing these reviews! You're awesome!

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Now, did I make it?
Edit: I did!
Edit 2: Can't believe I forgot this, but the story's in the sig.
(Thank you in advance!)
Edit: I did!
Edit 2: Can't believe I forgot this, but the story's in the sig.
(Thank you in advance!)
The Wind's Bestowed |
| A butcher, a beauty, a coroner, and a vagabond walk into a tavern…
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#7SRo-se Wrote: Now, did I make it?Fellas, we have a sacrifice to get this thread started now.





Parallel Hearts: Follow the Story of Cyra, and Her Path to Becoming the True Enemy[Anti-Hero/Dark Portal Fantasy]
Parallel Hearts(Book 1)—> Complete.
Parallel Hearts: Cursed Memories(Book 2)— Complete.
Parallel Hearts: Ill-Fated Heart(Book 3 - Reconstructing—> Image is the Cover)
Queen of Monsters(GameLit)—> Complete.
Solem et Lunam(Yuri)—> Complete.
Vita et Mors(Yuri)—> Complete.
Azure Night(Yuri)—> Complete.
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#8Edge Wrote:SRo-se Wrote: Now, did I make it?Fellas, we have a sacrifice to get this thread started now.
Glad to actually make it to something for once

And ngl, I did have the intention of reading bokhi's work, so this is the perfect opportunity.
Re: A Free Reviews for first five people, round 4
#9SRo-se Wrote:See? Everyone wins.Edge Wrote:SRo-se Wrote: Now, did I make it?Fellas, we have a sacrifice to get this thread started now.
Glad to actually make it to something for once![]()
And ngl, I did have the intention of reading bokhi's work, so this is the perfect opportunity.





Parallel Hearts: Follow the Story of Cyra, and Her Path to Becoming the True Enemy[Anti-Hero/Dark Portal Fantasy]
Parallel Hearts(Book 1)—> Complete.
Parallel Hearts: Cursed Memories(Book 2)— Complete.
Parallel Hearts: Ill-Fated Heart(Book 3 - Reconstructing—> Image is the Cover)
Queen of Monsters(GameLit)—> Complete.
Solem et Lunam(Yuri)—> Complete.
Vita et Mors(Yuri)—> Complete.
Azure Night(Yuri)—> Complete.
Re: A Free Reviews for first five people, round 4
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And closed again!
First give stories are as follows (not in the order they were submitted)
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/56052/the-hivemind-project-a-super-progression-adventure
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/55816/the-winds-bestowed
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/49362/the-stormcrow-cycle
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33997/parallel-hearts
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/52003/playing-with-the-dead
First give stories are as follows (not in the order they were submitted)
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/56052/the-hivemind-project-a-super-progression-adventure
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/55816/the-winds-bestowed
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/49362/the-stormcrow-cycle
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33997/parallel-hearts
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/52003/playing-with-the-dead