I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#1
No, no, you read that correctly. I'm posting in the right forum. One of my awesome readers commented on HUD: Wargame to say they were disappointed in the main character, Nic.
Do you know what this means? I finally wrote a character that was flawed enough, but still interesting enough, that a reader was disappointed in the character's poor decision making and behavior. Riding that fiiiine line--anything more, and the protagonist would just be a whiny edgelord, but anything less, and his impact on the story would be too small. I finally found that sweet spot!
Can anyone else relate to how exciting this is?! Tangible proof that I'm improving as a writer!
Do you know what this means? I finally wrote a character that was flawed enough, but still interesting enough, that a reader was disappointed in the character's poor decision making and behavior. Riding that fiiiine line--anything more, and the protagonist would just be a whiny edgelord, but anything less, and his impact on the story would be too small. I finally found that sweet spot!




Can anyone else relate to how exciting this is?! Tangible proof that I'm improving as a writer!
Re: I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#2
That is indeed satisfaction. Congratulations, now fix him through lots of pain.
*Diabolic noises*
*Diabolic noises*
Re: I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#3
That's the kind of feedback writers live for. Well done and congratulations.
Re: I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#4SigmaWriter Wrote: That is indeed satisfaction. Congratulations, now fix him through lots of pain.Oh yes. There will be some pain in the short term. But even more in the long term.
*Diabolic noises*

Re: I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#5
What stupid illiterate fool would ever be disappointed with the stupid actions of your protagonist? ;)
Or maybe Nic needs to Git Gud at Halo.
Or maybe Nic needs to Git Gud at Halo.
Re: I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#6
My eldest son hates one of my characters. He keeps calling her names. I'm so happy. Normally a tough crowd.
Re: I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#9
If you don't have at least one major character that readers complained about getting put through the wringer, your hero's journey is incomplete.
If luke hadn't had a hand lopped off, he might be a weak, pathetic, cynical drunkard instead of ending the series as a true hero.
If luke hadn't had a hand lopped off, he might be a weak, pathetic, cynical drunkard instead of ending the series as a true hero.
Re: I wrote a character that one of my readers was disappointed in (and it made my day)
#10
You've struck some real gold there. Awesome to hear about your success!