Looking for someone to review the first story I have written

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To be honest, I am not much of a writer. I was just someone who enjoyed reading as long as I took an interest in the story or when the writing was so damn good. But recently, I found myself wanting to write stories as well. So here I am, looking for someone to review my story, Astelta.

And If you want, I will review your story as well as thanks. (Just tell me which story if you have multiple ones.)

If you're up to it, just give me a private message.

Thank you,
Icarus Jaadi