Message me for a First Chapter review

I think I've now reviewed/rated everyone who PMed a request, but I'm technologically boneheaded (my first 3 'reviews' were just comments, and someone had to tell me I was doing it wrong!) so I may have missed someone. If so, sorry ... and lemme know (via PM!). 

I find it much easier to keep track of PMs than forum threads, so drop a note if you want a review. 

I'm staying largely positive in my reviews. Partly because I think it's a better way to help people grow as writers. Also because it's more fun for me to try to turn off the critical nastiness and just focus on the good stuff. But if you definitely want to hear about flaws, let me know.