Re: Does anyone's first chapter need some extra love?
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Greetings, I am Knightraveness' husband. She is terrible at requesting for assistance thus here I am!
She is a new writer and her novel was posted not too long ago, she is excited with every new view, follower and favorite.
I would appreciate it if you dropped in her novel and left a comment on her first chapter.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/53733/channelers
-Fair winds, Dyzrael.
She is a new writer and her novel was posted not too long ago, she is excited with every new view, follower and favorite.
I would appreciate it if you dropped in her novel and left a comment on her first chapter.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/53733/channelers
-Fair winds, Dyzrael.
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Just posted the first twenty chapters of my story! Would love some feedback. It's called Tower of Hell. Thanks so much!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/53773/tower-of-hell
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Re: Does anyone's first chapter need some extra love?
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I just made a prologue. Had been mulling about it since forever.
The story it's in the sig.
Please show some extra love. Thank you
The story it's in the sig.
Please show some extra love. Thank you

Re: Does anyone's first chapter need some extra love?
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*Raises hand*
My first chapter has been up for months now but the comment section is rather barren. Would love to get some feedback, criticism is welcome.
My first chapter has been up for months now but the comment section is rather barren. Would love to get some feedback, criticism is welcome.