Re: Does anyone's first chapter need some extra love?

Greetings, I am Knightraveness' husband. She is terrible at requesting for assistance thus here I am!
She is a new writer and her novel was posted not too long ago, she is excited with every new view, follower and favorite.

I would appreciate it if you dropped in her novel and left a comment on her first chapter.

-Fair winds, Dyzrael.