Re: FREE Reviews to NEW Stories

#103
Raz Wrote: Not sure if it's too late to throw my hat in the ring, but HUD: Wargame has four chapters posted as of this reply. (New chapters daily for the next month or so.) I'd be grateful if you'd be willing to chuck mine at the bottom of that generous queue!

Not too late at all!
I will check it out. I just read your synopsis. If it's not my style of story I will reply via PM with some thoughts.
Cheers!

Re: FREE Reviews to NEW Stories

#120
This community is so awesome and you're awesome, too. Started to post around a month ago. Would love your feedback.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/56565/all-the-lonely-people

Synopsis: When our narrator's wife dies, he struggles to be a good parent to his daughter, Eleanor. He wants to be, but he is stuck in a whirlwind of depression; seeing all of his mistakes past and present and how they would negatively impact Eleanor. When he starts having visions of his wife, he starts to question his sanity, but also the makeup of the known universe. Is it a ghost? Is he seeing a mirage from the past? Is he seeing beyond the veil of space and time?
It's a journey of self-discovery, but more than that, it's a journey of love, towards love.