Mad Wrote:Sake Wrote: oh you
overall I think your diary is well written, because it actually feels like a diary, what's with a stream of consciousness style and all that. You've done a pretty good job.
But why not write the date and hour next to every entry? Personally, I always note these things, because I'd be pretty confused if I sat down to read it later and not know what date I added what entry(diary owner here)
Sake Wrote: But why not write the date and hour next to every entry?Because having a date would mean I'd have to, like, keep track of something. Eek.
I put the cycle, I think that's enough lol
Sake Wrote: You've done a pretty good job.Thanks!!!
The main character writes excerpts in her journal as a way for you to hear her thoughts and opinions on stuff, while still being traditionally narrated...its a little experimental but i think it turned out well. There's an audio version on my youtube too, DM if youd like to listen to that too.