Re: novel written like a diary
#3Mad Wrote: Ta-da.
They're surprisingly few and far between.
oh you
already read that. even commented.
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Re: novel written like a diary
#5Mad Wrote:Sake Wrote: oh you
overall I think your diary is well written, because it actually feels like a diary, what's with a stream of consciousness style and all that. You've done a pretty good job.
But why not write the date and hour next to every entry? Personally, I always note these things, because I'd be pretty confused if I sat down to read it later and not know what date I added what entry(diary owner here)
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I think mine is quite similar to what you are looking for. It’s not exactly a diary but my style makes it seem like one. It can also be quite confusing with short chapters here and there. When you are reading, just keep an open mind and treat it like short stories in an anime. I hope you like it!


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#7Sake Wrote: But why not write the date and hour next to every entry?Because having a date would mean I'd have to, like, keep track of something. Eek.
I put the cycle, I think that's enough lol
Sake Wrote: You've done a pretty good job.Thanks!!!
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not a novel, but a short story
The main character writes excerpts in her journal as a way for you to hear her thoughts and opinions on stuff, while still being traditionally narrated...its a little experimental but i think it turned out well. There's an audio version on my youtube too, DM if youd like to listen to that too.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36428/dead-man-division
The main character writes excerpts in her journal as a way for you to hear her thoughts and opinions on stuff, while still being traditionally narrated...its a little experimental but i think it turned out well. There's an audio version on my youtube too, DM if youd like to listen to that too.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36428/dead-man-division