Hi Community Peeps!

I have been reviewing my fiction, and several things pop out at me that I wanted to seek feedback and help on. Instead of making like, more than one or two posts, I am just putting them all together in one. Hope that's ok!

With that being said ... let me begin:

1. My fiction description. Hey, I'm a poet and didn't know it. I have re-written my fiction description a  few times, but I feel that it is lackluster. I am not the great and being decisive with describing things in short paragraphs. My chapters are 5k words and up for goodness sake.

If someone would be willing to give me a solid bit of feedback, or even a re-write, that would be amazing.

2. Fiction Cover Art. I had a friend make this for me. I felt that it was a solid visual representation of Reeve, but I feel like it is a very very simple cover. Any feedback would be welcome!

Anyways, those are the two major things. I included a link in my signature.

Appreciate everyone's help!

Best Regards,

That Ratty Fellow

About the cover. The image of the mage is cool but the font of the text is lacking and too simple. If you PM me the cover image without the text I can try making it fancier by tomorrow.

The synopsis is really great! Although it is a bit longer than usual, I don't mind that in my personal opinion. 

Maybe try to shave off a few of the rhetorical questions, combining the first and last paragraphs. Then sprinkle a few  of the rhetorical questions to get the interest going!

Hope this helps!