Re: Blurb feedback.

#2
I read it first and didn't really understand certain parts. However when I had it read to me I got a better understanding what you were trying to convey. I like the bit about no males being in the school for a very long time. I am not sure why but the first line to me seems like it could be somewhere else in the blurb. I love the line but It just reads weird to me there. 
I am looking forward to reading your fictions off of the blurb however so it did the job nicely. 

Re: Blurb feedback.

#3
Didn’t feel very cohesive, felt a bit as if you stitched different blurbs together. I’d recommend keeping it to one paragraph, not the 7 odd sentences and small paragraphs seperated from one another like now.

Keep it simple as well, you want to draw the reader in with an overarching plot point or moment in the story, you don’t need to mention everything that is going to be built up.