LITRPG/Progression Fantasy Review Swaps!!!!

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If you've got a LITRPG/Progression Fantasy Fiction, just post in here, I'll read 10k words, give it a review, and then after that you can read and review 10k words (4 chapters) of my LITRPG Isekai Fiction: The Dream Knight. 

I'd love a review on the title, blurb, cover, and how badly or well I did when It comes to enticing people to keep reading. I don't have much experience with LITRPG so I'd love some feedback on the system aspects as well. Lemme know when you post your fiction what areas you want me to focus on/not focus on, or if you want just a general review. Also let me know which chapter reaches 10k words. 

I look forward to seeing all your stories!! :D 

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Jonsoon Wrote:
Tomato Wrote: Here, I don't know If this is counted as LitRPG but I also use Levels and HP and all those stuff

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/46665/i-want-to-get-isekaid-but-the-world-does-not-want
Finished your review. 

I'm also done with your review. Since you asked to get some advice to your Cover, Blurb, and Title, I focused on those. If you want a good review(Basically, all 5 star) I could give the Cover, Title, and Blurb review to you via PM and do a good one at the Royalroad. I'm basically just switching It.

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TomOBedlam Wrote: I should have time to read and review today. I’ll do a review swap if you’d like. I like LitRPG and I love most things involving dream powers/imagery, so this sounds like it fits my tastes.

Happy with a general review. 10k words is the first 5 chapters. 

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/46849/tricksters-song
Sounds great! I'll get around to reading yours later on today

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TomOBedlam Wrote: I should have time to read and review today. I’ll do a review swap if you’d like. I like LitRPG and I love most things involving dream powers/imagery, so this sounds like it fits my tastes.

Happy with a general review. 10k words is the first 5 chapters. 

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/46849/tricksters-song
Thank you so much for the review! You gave a lot of great feedback and pointed out a lot of issues I failed to notice! I'll get out a review of your's later on in the day.