I will return an advanced review with one of my own on the story in your signature or the one you link here. Once I receive one from you I will work on yours, so it's a first review first served kinda deal. If you feel as if you don't like the story or would give a bad rating feel free to PM and give a heads up about it, I'll do the same. A lot of my reviews are detailed, I'd like to think, feel free to look at my previous ones through my profile.
My fiction, Legend of the Spellthief, hits 10,000 words at Chapter 2 - A Taste of Battle, but if you read further I will return the amount you read back unless I really like your story and want to read more. If you leave comments on the chapters I will also try to return these, I tend to give a lot of grammar/spelling/flow suggestions in my comments if I don't have any outstanding comments or thoughts on what transpired in the chapter.
As a forewarning, I do not like romance/sex centric stories, especially if the sex scenes are written out. Most other stories are fair game, though I have a preference for Fantasy and GameLit/LitRPG.
The Butcher of Gadobhra
Flight of The Draykes
Sovereign of Loss Book 1: Invader
I'm interested in the review swap. My novel is the Flight of The Draykes and it's a fantasy alt-historical novel with elements of cultivation along with elements of GameLit novels.
I'm game for a 15k review swap since that will provide a fair idea for the two of us.
Be warned though that my initial 6 chapters are part of my original draft before I changed my style completely, so the change might be a bit jarring. The quality will also (hopefully) improve as you read.
I plan to do a lot of things later with it but I finally have my first action, training scene so I decided to find a review swap, its an urban fantasy/mystery that will eventually transfer into the system/infinity genre (but not for quite some time)
Seersucker Wrote:MalevolenceMau Wrote:Seersucker Wrote: Hey, I'd be up for a swap if you're still doing them.
I sure am.
Sweet! My story is a hair over 20k words. I'll read at least that much of yours and review it within the next day or so. Deal?
Yes, my story reaches 20k at the end of Chapter 5 - Avanar's First Spellthief.