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Thank you for this. I'd appreciate if you took a look at either of my stories:

Teenage Badass: an urban fantasy story about a young monster hunter out on her own, fighting a pack of time travelling werewolves in a tiny mountain town 


The Chrome Horde: a post-apocalyptic road trip across central Asia with a motorized Mongol Horde following a fossil fuel apocalypse

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Hello, Buller. I’ve seen some of your reviews before, and so I was given the impression that LN fiction isn’t your cup of tea. But either way, I’d love you to review my novel because your reviews are very straightforward.

It’s an isekai fantasy that I revised weeks ago. No harem, power fantasy or wish fullfillment of the sort. Just a whole bunch of characters with their own personality that clash from time to time. There are 6 MCs in total, and one lead character, who is OP af but not a hero by any means.

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Hey! Thanks for doing this! If you have time, could you review Leveled Plane for me? I would really appreciate it!

Leveled Plane: A LitRPG/VR story focused less around stats and more around how the characters interact with each other and the world that they're now a part of. It's a bit of a dark story, there's no romance, and there's a heavy emphasis on how the characters struggle to build themselves back up just to survive until tomorrow.

Thanks again!

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My Children From Another World
[Original Fantasy/Isekai/Dad Protagonist]

With souls and issues from a world very unlike his own, Rakta Velbrun must raise his children right, train their strange abilities, and keep the world from swallowing them whole.

Or: A ex-Adventurer father realizes his kids have cheat skills.

My first fiction on Royal Road that I am putting a lot of time and effort into, My Children from Another World is an isekai fantasy story about fatherhood, identities, and stories. 

If you read it, it'd make my day :D

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Totally late, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart for caring for us small fry 😁

I’ll put my fictions out there IF you have time, and hope you enjoy. Also... I may hate myself for this, but feel free to be critically honest with whichever you choose. My goal is to improve my writing, and constructive criticism is best for that. 

Little Red is a bit self-explanatory. It’s fun and humorous but still explores some dark elements. 

Ashes is deep and dark werewolf fiction.

P.S. You’re awesome. 


A werewolf with a past.
A vigilante with a wolf. 
What could go wrong? 

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free reviews? hope you're still taking some bro. it's the story in my signature, i finished my first week of posting and it's 10k words so far

Quote:Valeria Earnos, daughter of the current Pendragon, involves herself in a critical point of the Iolaire Commonwealth: the Eighteenth Succession. Aiming to succeed her father's place, she alongside eight other candidates declare their claim for the popular crown chosen by the good people. She gathers her trusted friends, her swords and wit, and there, she embarks. On this four-year journey, only the First Spirit knows what she'll find.
Upon this New Earth, they travel. The echoes of the ancient Earth lingers still, and the thrones of today's threats house themselves plenty. Daughter of the Pendragon of Peace, walk tall and venture forth as your father taught; perhaps then, after hardship and strife, you may find what you are searching for. 

it's low fantasy, if i had to put an actual date to it, it'd be the equivalent to the 1880s or something idk