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#621
If psychological low-technological scifi, or maybe dystopian slice of life can interest you, you might try A Nation of Distances.
(It's a story about unhealthy societies, sexism, unhealthy expectations and the like, so if it's not your cup of tea at all, nevermind)
(It's a story about unhealthy societies, sexism, unhealthy expectations and the like, so if it's not your cup of tea at all, nevermind)
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Thank you for this. I'd appreciate if you took a look at either of my stories:
Teenage Badass: an urban fantasy story about a young monster hunter out on her own, fighting a pack of time travelling werewolves in a tiny mountain town
or...
The Chrome Horde: a post-apocalyptic road trip across central Asia with a motorized Mongol Horde following a fossil fuel apocalypse
Teenage Badass: an urban fantasy story about a young monster hunter out on her own, fighting a pack of time travelling werewolves in a tiny mountain town
or...
The Chrome Horde: a post-apocalyptic road trip across central Asia with a motorized Mongol Horde following a fossil fuel apocalypse
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Hi! I'm a newbie writer, so I need someone to tell me if my novel is good or bad.
So if you're into fantasy/action or isekai novels, please feel free to have a look at my novel.
So if you're into fantasy/action or isekai novels, please feel free to have a look at my novel.
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#624
Hello, I would like to be added to the list for the story in my signature. Thank you!

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#625
I'm publishing my first novel: Emil's Night, a supernatural mystery about a guy stuck between the world of mythology and the real world. Includes themes of regret and suspense.
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#626
Hello, Buller. I’ve seen some of your reviews before, and so I was given the impression that LN fiction isn’t your cup of tea. But either way, I’d love you to review my novel because your reviews are very straightforward.
It’s an isekai fantasy that I revised weeks ago. No harem, power fantasy or wish fullfillment of the sort. Just a whole bunch of characters with their own personality that clash from time to time. There are 6 MCs in total, and one lead character, who is OP af but not a hero by any means.
It’s an isekai fantasy that I revised weeks ago. No harem, power fantasy or wish fullfillment of the sort. Just a whole bunch of characters with their own personality that clash from time to time. There are 6 MCs in total, and one lead character, who is OP af but not a hero by any means.
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#627
Hey! Thanks for doing this! If you have time, could you review Leveled Plane for me? I would really appreciate it!
Leveled Plane: A LitRPG/VR story focused less around stats and more around how the characters interact with each other and the world that they're now a part of. It's a bit of a dark story, there's no romance, and there's a heavy emphasis on how the characters struggle to build themselves back up just to survive until tomorrow.
Thanks again!
Leveled Plane: A LitRPG/VR story focused less around stats and more around how the characters interact with each other and the world that they're now a part of. It's a bit of a dark story, there's no romance, and there's a heavy emphasis on how the characters struggle to build themselves back up just to survive until tomorrow.
Thanks again!
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#628
dammit. I thought I'd set up a notif setting so I could see new posts on this.
Guess I'll start reading.
Guess I'll start reading.
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#629
Hey DrBuller! can you take a look at my story as well?
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51276/the-encrypted-data-of-kaiden-cypher
it's a Cyberpunk/Dystopian Thriller. It follows Kaiden Cypher, a third party detective whose been tasked to investigate a potential double homicide, which doesn't fall under purview.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51276/the-encrypted-data-of-kaiden-cypher
it's a Cyberpunk/Dystopian Thriller. It follows Kaiden Cypher, a third party detective whose been tasked to investigate a potential double homicide, which doesn't fall under purview.
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My Children From Another World
[Original Fantasy/Isekai/Dad Protagonist]
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51532/my-children-from-another-world
With souls and issues from a world very unlike his own, Rakta Velbrun must raise his children right, train their strange abilities, and keep the world from swallowing them whole.
Or: A ex-Adventurer father realizes his kids have cheat skills.
My first fiction on Royal Road that I am putting a lot of time and effort into, My Children from Another World is an isekai fantasy story about fatherhood, identities, and stories.
If you read it, it'd make my day :D
[Original Fantasy/Isekai/Dad Protagonist]
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51532/my-children-from-another-world
With souls and issues from a world very unlike his own, Rakta Velbrun must raise his children right, train their strange abilities, and keep the world from swallowing them whole.
Or: A ex-Adventurer father realizes his kids have cheat skills.
My first fiction on Royal Road that I am putting a lot of time and effort into, My Children from Another World is an isekai fantasy story about fatherhood, identities, and stories.
If you read it, it'd make my day :D
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#631
Check out my newest fiction Peril For Calamity if you want! Not the best and it's still very small but I'm working on posting the next few chapters and want some feedback.
Thank you for your time,
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51861/peril-for-calamity
Thank you for your time,
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51861/peril-for-calamity
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Hi Buller,
I've starting writing my own story recently, if you're still up for some review. It's slow progression fantasy adventure stuff. No sci-fi although some have hinted I could add the tag... I wonder what are your thoughts on it :)
(Link in signature)
I've starting writing my own story recently, if you're still up for some review. It's slow progression fantasy adventure stuff. No sci-fi although some have hinted I could add the tag... I wonder what are your thoughts on it :)
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Appreciate you giving your time to this noble task.
If and when you work through your backlog, I'd always love another review for the story in my sig.
It's a story-rich Sci Fi/Fantasy LitRPG and my first crack at posting on RR as well as writing LitRPG so I'm eager for feedback.
Many thanks!
If and when you work through your backlog, I'd always love another review for the story in my sig.
It's a story-rich Sci Fi/Fantasy LitRPG and my first crack at posting on RR as well as writing LitRPG so I'm eager for feedback.
Many thanks!
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#634
I'll sign up The Paradigm for the free review. It's a steal. Love you for doing this.

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#635
If you're still doing reviews here's my novel hope you enjoy
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#636
how about you review my story it is a litrpg with some cultivation about a person geting isiked into a blade of grass. it wont be great and as of right now it is very short but a the very least if you give me a bad review i can learn from that and do better
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#637
Totally late, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart for caring for us small fry 😁
I’ll put my fictions out there IF you have time, and hope you enjoy. Also... I may hate myself for this, but feel free to be critically honest with whichever you choose. My goal is to improve my writing, and constructive criticism is best for that.
Little Red is a bit self-explanatory. It’s fun and humorous but still explores some dark elements.
Ashes is deep and dark werewolf fiction.
P.S. You’re awesome.
~Rhea
I’ll put my fictions out there IF you have time, and hope you enjoy. Also... I may hate myself for this, but feel free to be critically honest with whichever you choose. My goal is to improve my writing, and constructive criticism is best for that.
Little Red is a bit self-explanatory. It’s fun and humorous but still explores some dark elements.
Ashes is deep and dark werewolf fiction.
P.S. You’re awesome.
~Rhea
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A werewolf with a past.
A vigilante with a wolf.
What could go wrong?
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#638
I have read pretty much everything in the queue, save for the two last ones. Will be starting up the actual reviewing tommorow
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#639
free reviews? hope you're still taking some bro. it's the story in my signature, i finished my first week of posting and it's 10k words so far
it's low fantasy, if i had to put an actual date to it, it'd be the equivalent to the 1880s or something idk
Quote:Valeria Earnos, daughter of the current Pendragon, involves herself in a critical point of the Iolaire Commonwealth: the Eighteenth Succession. Aiming to succeed her father's place, she alongside eight other candidates declare their claim for the popular crown chosen by the good people. She gathers her trusted friends, her swords and wit, and there, she embarks. On this four-year journey, only the First Spirit knows what she'll find.
Upon this New Earth, they travel. The echoes of the ancient Earth lingers still, and the thrones of today's threats house themselves plenty. Daughter of the Pendragon of Peace, walk tall and venture forth as your father taught; perhaps then, after hardship and strife, you may find what you are searching for.
it's low fantasy, if i had to put an actual date to it, it'd be the equivalent to the 1880s or something idk
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#640WayG48 Wrote: it's low fantasy, if i had to put an actual date to it, it'd be the equivalent to the 1880s or something idk

A few more minutes before the reviews roll out I suppose