First adv/fantasy - first chapter - feedback requested.
And this time I have decided to diverge from my romance and come up with something different.
Please take a look at my first (and only) chapter of Blood Moon, an adventure-fantasy, that's been brewing in my head for quite some time now.
This is my first ever fantasy. I have some ideas on how I'm going to progress this, have written some further chapters, but releasing them would depend on your feedback on the first.
So I'd be grateful if you could spare a few minutes.
Thank you! :)