Re: Need Comments for Chapter 40

Hi all, this is not a request for a review swap. I was just hoping that the kind readers of this forum can provide me with some critiques and comments for my Chapter 40. Since it is an entirely fresh POV, you would not need to read the rest of the story to follow that chapter for the most part. Here is the link:

This is mostly because I am writing so fast for the writathon, I have no clue what I am writing is good or not. I need help from the readers of this website. I look forward to hearing from you what you think! Thank you.
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