Re: Updated the Art for my Title
#1
Hi everyone! I just updated my cover forĀ When Immortal Ascension Fails. I like it but I know you all can see things my exhausted self might not so any constructive advice on how to make it even better would be appreciated. ^.^

Re: Updated the Art for my Title
#2
This is very well done. The only minor nitpick I can see is the "As" in Ascension. I realize it's a stylistic choice, but it looks a little funny to me.