Re: Offering reviews

#1
Yosh, got a lot of free time. Although I only came here on the request of a friend to review his story, I noticed this platform has a lot of writers, among which there are quite a lot whose talent isn't brought into light. Soooooooooo anyway, you can just drop a link to your story and I'll give a honest review about it. Kay?

Also a small present for Dragoak, free advertisement for his story. 
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36294/fallen-worlds 
(ngl this pretty meh)https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36524/fallen-worlds-island
(the reason I came online [new released])https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/38073/fallen-worlds-kings-rule

Welp fr decide whenever or not you gonna read those yourself.
(Also if you find this, consider it free sponsership or smthing, tho if it makes your story more famous, you owe me tomi)



Re: Offering reviews

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splattenburgers Wrote: Would you be willing to do a "first impressions" thing on JUST the first chapter for my novel? It's about 4k or so words.

Sure, in fact would be happier to for stories which  are relatively new so i don't have a hella lot of chapters to read

Re: Offering reviews

#16

Ly Wrote:
splattenburgers Wrote: Would you be willing to do a "first impressions" thing on JUST the first chapter for my novel? It's about 4k or so words.

Sure, in fact would be happier to for stories which  are relatively new so i don't have a hella lot of chapters to read

Here:


https://www.dropbox.com/s/8hfy08ew8i14y0j/TheDisillusionedRevisedChapter1.pdf?dl=0

It's only the first chapter and is about 5k words.

EDIT: I should note that this is not LitRPG, but a more conventional type of sci-fi novel. Albeit not hard-sci stuff.