Yosh, got a lot of free time. Although I only came here on the request of a friend to review his story, I noticed this platform has a lot of writers, among which there are quite a lot whose talent isn't brought into light. Soooooooooo anyway, you can just drop a link to your story and I'll give a honest review about it. Kay?

Also a small present for Dragoak, free advertisement for his story. 
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36294/fallen-worlds 
(ngl this pretty meh)https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36524/fallen-worlds-island
(the reason I came online [new released])https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/38073/fallen-worlds-kings-rule

Welp fr decide whenever or not you gonna read those yourself.
(Also if you find this, consider it free sponsership or smthing, tho if it makes your story more famous, you owe me tomi)

Thanks for the offer! You can check out either of my story, or both if you like:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37108/the-last-woman-on-earth

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37670/everyone-is-a-superhero-apart-from-me

Daniel Wrote: Thanks for the offer! You can check out either of my story, or both if you like:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37108/the-last-woman-on-earth

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37670/everyone-is-a-superhero-apart-from-me

mmh, pretty sure I said new writers. But whatev, will do

Same here, https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37441/a-martial-odyssey it's a wuxia.

For now nice stories but imma sleep first before finishing them

Would also be interested in a review for my story. It's a new adult science fantasy story with some psychothriller elements.

I never say no to an honest review. I hope younger than a month counts as 'new'?

Reboot Reality

It's a reincarnation Fantasy. So far I'm still on life#1 which is mostly Adventure and Survival. I try to keep it light-hearted despite some setbacks.

Thanks a lot for offering to do this. I know how hard it is to read and offer advice so quickly. I have a queue of 10 stories to review after writathon. 


I'd love a honest review of mine, it's less than a month old: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37326/convergence-cycle-book-one-ranger-of-the-north

Mine, maybe???

Link in the first line of my signature. Second-line leads to my discord...

Please have a look at A World of Monsters. It's a monster reincarnation story with Buddhist elements. 

I would recommend a World of Monsters as well.

You are free to read my D&D inspired story. Any advice is greatly appreciated.
I'll look into your friend's work as well and probably drop a review.

Would you be willing to do a "first impressions" thing on JUST the first chapter for my novel? It's about 4k or so words.

So i just started writing again after 2 years. Im still pretty new to writing and English isn't my native language but i still want to write. Here is my story:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37274/faraway-land

It only 3 chapters now but i still want some feedback for future improvements 

splattenburgers Wrote: Would you be willing to do a "first impressions" thing on JUST the first chapter for my novel? It's about 4k or so words.

Sure, in fact would be happier to for stories which  are relatively new so i don't have a hella lot of chapters to read

splattenburgers Wrote: Would you be willing to do a "first impressions" thing on JUST the first chapter for my novel? It's about 4k or so words.

Also, coulnd't find your novel

Ly Wrote:

splattenburgers Wrote: Would you be willing to do a "first impressions" thing on JUST the first chapter for my novel? It's about 4k or so words.

Sure, in fact would be happier to for stories which  are relatively new so i don't have a hella lot of chapters to read

Here:


https://www.dropbox.com/s/8hfy08ew8i14y0j/TheDisillusionedRevisedChapter1.pdf?dl=0

It's only the first chapter and is about 5k words.

EDIT: I should note that this is not LitRPG, but a more conventional type of sci-fi novel. Albeit not hard-sci stuff.

Haven't been on here long but I've posted up to Chapter thirty-two in a few week's time so there is plenty to read!

Only been writing for about a month, but hopefully my stuff is awesome lol. Link below 

Here we go, thank anyone for the feedback in advance
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37745/speedrun

Hopefully you could get to mine!