Let’s each leave a comment on each other’s first chapter and then decide if we want to go further.

Mine is LITrpg. 

Eightfold Invasion: Simon doesn’t know if he’s going insane or his violent RPG is altering reality - and he doesn’t know which would be worse.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/34443/eightfold-invasion/chapter/530223/chapter-1

My first chapter is long (10k words), but I'll take a comment swap if it's okay with you?

Tenori Wrote: My first chapter is long (10k words), but I'll take a comment swap if it's okay with you?

Sounds good.

Would you be open to doing Prologue+Chapter 1? My prologue is barely about 600 words.

Oh, I like this idea. I’ve left a comment on your first chapter; here’s my story if you have the time to do the same: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36157/selenas-reign-the-golden-gryphon

Ankur_93 Wrote: Would you be open to doing Prologue+Chapter 1? My prologue is barely about 600 words.

Accepted. My comment on the prologue is not the most recent, but chapter one is.

Elliot_Flanders Wrote: Oh, I like this idea. I’ve left a comment on your first chapter; here’s my story if you have the time to do the same: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36157/selenas-reign-the-golden-gryphon

Accepted and commented.

I’ve accepted all the trades so far, and a pattern may be developing. My opening confuses too many, and I may write a different novel after rethinking. Thank you everyone!

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The Wrote: If you're still open to doing it, I'll do a comment swap on my prologue or 1st chapter.

OK sounds good.

I’m not doing and more comment swaps on this book right now. I may start a different novel, taking time to rethink.

Here's my fiction if you would like to comment swap

Editor Wrote: Here's my fiction if you would like to comment swap

It seems this story was deleted.

I am still working on this story, and reopening for comment swaps. If you already did chapter one please move on to chapter two, since a book only gets one chance to make a first impression. If this is your first chapter comment swap with me please do the reedited chapter one. I will comment on the first chapter I haven’t commented on yet.

Sure! Here's mine: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37108/the-last-woman-on-earth-a-military-science-fiction

Do you want to follow and favorite IF you like the book too? I can do it :D

Daniel Wrote: Sure! Here's mine: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37108/the-last-woman-on-earth-a-military-science-fiction

Do you want to follow and favorite IF you like the book too? I can do it :D

Sounds good. I commented. Only follow and favorite if you feel like it.

I'd be willing to comment swap, here's my fiction. Hope you like it :)

Strif3 Wrote: I'd be willing to comment swap, here's my fiction. Hope you like it :)

Accepted and I left a comment.

If you are still doing the comment swap, here is my story.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37158/rachel-kalos-world-protector

I'd be down, if you're still around for it. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37363/a-fractal-divide