Hey guys, I've recently hit a wall with regards to the plot of my first story.  After looking back over what I had, I ended up changing things and now have 2 intros.  Once I straighten up the plot, I'm unsure which one I should use going forward.

I've posted the intros as a fiction here, but haven't received too much feedback.
Would anyone be interested in checking them out and helping me decide which one to use?

Btw, The end of intro 2 has a poll

Link: Intros 1 & 2

Thanks for your time!