Re: Review swap

#1
My story, A world of Monsters,  follows a monster and a human in a system word, with a Buddhist/Hindu philosophy. The System is especially influenced by this philosophy.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/35642/a-world-of-monsters

Things I can promise, in the story:
1. Grammar [As per Graammerly]
2. Monster will be a monster while the human will be a human.
3. Evolutions.
4. No harem.
5. Grimdark
6. Well defined characters [In my opinion at least XD]
7. No OPness.

If any of these things catch your attention, give the story a read. I would prefer it if you read my story until chapter 8, which is ideal, but until chapter 6 would do too. 



Re: Review swap

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Yamata Wrote: I will give your story a read and will also give you a review, I am Hindu my self and would like to see what your story entails. My story is in my signature. I will leave you a review tomorrow afternoon, once i have read your story finish.



Thank you. I will do the same. :)

Re: Review swap

#12

Onch Wrote: Hey! I would like to swap reviews with you. My story (link in my signature) is a mix of scifi/fantasy with a heavy focus on comedy.



I have 2 stories lines up currently. I will get to yours after them. I would leave an advance review and I would like it if you would do the same. :)

Re: Review swap

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Ankur_93 Wrote:
TheAbsoluteOne Wrote: Ok, let's do a review swap! I'll read your novel till chapter 8 and review. You read mine and till chapter 12(The chapters are small) and review.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/31338/art-of-mortality

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Alright. lets do this then.

I'm already reading yours. Great writing, although I found the prologue hard to understand. Maybe that was just a placeholder for things which will be revealed later on. 

Re: Review swap

#17
I like it when there's philosophical and history/religion cues on stories! I read the premise of your story and it looks promising!

I can offer mine in exchange for review from you. (although my story is a combination of multiple mythologies and religions/philosophies/societies it might be a little over whelming: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33855/crucis


I'll leave you a review once I'm done reading yours. Let me know if you're interested

Re: Review swap

#18

Phodoodles Wrote: I like it when there's philosophical and history/religion cues on stories! I read the premise of your story and it looks promising!

I can offer mine in exchange for review from you. (although my story is a combination of multiple mythologies and religions/philosophies/societies it might be a little over whelming: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33855/crucis


I'll leave you a review once I'm done reading yours. Let me know if you're interested



Alright. Let's do this then. :)