Re: Best Review swap right here. Look no further

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Hello! 

I feel foolish. For a month now I have been posting my story wondering how people got all of these reviews. From what I have seen most people offer to read and review for the same from someone else. I am in great need of tips on my writing style. In return I will offer to read and review your story as well.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32865/tempest-rogue

Here is my story. Though grammar is not my strong point I can offer whatever you are looking for. Worried about your magic system, premise, characters..etc. Let me know, and I will pay attention to that while reading!